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NEPTUNE

NEPTUNE

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  • NEPTUNE
    All r born to be *alone*,
    Yet in my journey of solitude,
    trespassers quest emotional connections,

    I welcomed them
    n gave them a place in my lil heart,
    tho,
    they remain as trespassers
    ever ready to abscond

    N 'm here wid doors open,
    leave n let others to get in
    said my inner voice,
    mewling, yet silent!

    ~Neptune
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    Honey bunch
    Honey bunch

    Your heart is like a revolving door! Maybe it's time to put up a sign: "No entry without a permanent pass!" :giggle:


    But who knows, the next visitor might decide to stay. Keep those doors open,:evilgrin1: ✨


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    NEPTUNE
    NEPTUNE
    :angry:
    my doors r closed n locked, I double checked dat
    @Honey bunch​
    Lion_Hearted
    Lion_Hearted
    This piece captures the complexity of solitude and the transient nature of human connections beautifully. The metaphoric use of "trespassers" to describe emotional connections highlights their fleeting and uncertain presence, contrasting with the openness of your heart. The inner conflict, depicted through the "mewling, yet silent" voice, adds depth, revealing vulnerability and acceptance.

    A couple of suggestions for refinement:

    1. "n gave them a place in my lil heart" – While "lil" conveys warmth, you might consider using "small" or "fragile" to enhance the vulnerability further.


    2. "N 'm here wid doors open" – "N" and "wid" feel casual, but if you're aiming for a more profound tone, replacing them with "And" and "with" might align better with the emotional weight of the piece.



    Overall, the poem is heartfelt and reflective, with a rawness that draws readers into your inner world.
    NEPTUNE
    'm not a worm dat can be crushed by some foot,
    'm not a helot to clean yr boots.
    'm not a piece of meat for u to devour,
    nor am I a toy for u to showcase,
    'm not a butterfly who cl'd entertain u by it's beauty,
    n 'm not a doggo whom u c'ld tame,
    Rather, 'm a sleeky blue planet,
    massive yet lean
    n
    lean yet massive
    I shrink my world yet
    -then 'm der- as vast as thy sea expanse.

    Neptune

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    Happy Mornings Elara ✨
    :)
    Lion_Hearted
    Lion_Hearted
    This is an empowering and striking piece. The defiant tone challenges the objectification and reduction of one’s worth, using vivid metaphors to reject the roles of a worm, helot, toy, or even a dog to be tamed. The line "I’m a sleeky blue planet" is particularly powerful—it conveys a sense of autonomy and magnitude, yet with an underlying sense of vulnerability. The juxtaposition of "massive yet lean" and "lean yet massive" speaks to the complexity of existence, the balance between strength and fragility.

    The final lines, where you shrink your world only to expand again, reflect a deep internal transformation: an understanding of one's capacity to be both vast and contained. This suggests both resilience and adaptability—qualities that make a person, or "planet," unshakable despite the forces that seek to diminish them.
    Lion_Hearted
    Lion_Hearted
    There’s a raw power in this poem, a refusal to be minimized. It feels almost like an anthem of self-empowerment. Would you like to build on this energy further, maybe focusing more on the contrast between the "small" and "vast" parts of oneself? The imagery and message are strong—there's a lot of room for expansion.
    NEPTUNE
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    I wish- Dat I could have swept my miseries off thy dais where I dance my own lyf.
    I wish- Dat I could have rewritten my own story.
    I wish- Dat I could have been less humane n less emotional.
    I wish- Dat I could have foreseen thy people's real motive.
    Then, suddenly did I realize.
    Miseries brought giggles.
    Past made memories.
    humanity made me who 'm
    emotion shaped my soul n left thy scars- a fyn true testimony of my journey
    and
    People taught me lessons-
    Dat will' never disappear
    Thanking those who made a bond wid me, n thanks for them- who initiated themself to break dat LOL!
    remember- wid out u- still I breathe, lives n blinks my fucking damn eyes- eat meah!


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    NEPTUNE
    I used to be a silent person
    kinda drowned out n my own world of emotions every now n then
    then u came as a friend
    thou I hadn't realized thy quote *a friend turns a foe*
    yr shadow left me wid wounds I can never forget of.
    It's lil happiness in a never-ending misery, BUT i said *fuck off*.
    N now 'm in control of my own thoughts, led by thy truth, n no longer blind.

    ~Neptune
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    Honey bunch

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    Theeratha Thuyarathil Naanum
    Kaatrodu En Karainthai Neeyum
    Neengatha Nilavoli Aanai
    Anbe Anbe…

    Maru Jenman Irundhal Kuda
    Uyire Un Karam Pidipene
    Un Kaal Thadam Naan Thodarvene
    Anbe Anbe…

    Kanave Unai Vanthu Sera
    Naan Ingu Varam Ondru Ketan

    En Maranam Neringidumbothum
    Un Ninaivinil Vaazhnthiduvene..

    :heart1:


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    Honey bunch

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    Un vizhigalil vizhunthu naan ezhugiren
    Ezhunthum yen marubadi vizhugiren
    Un paarvaiyil thondrida alaigiren
    Alainthum yen marubadi tholaigiren

    Orr nodiyum unnai naan pirinthaal
    Porkalathai unarven uyiril
    En aasai ellaam serthu
    Orr kaditham varaigiren anbae..

    :inlove:
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    NEPTUNE
    I climbed up- thy *self-past*, to see guards wid an aura saluting me at every single phase. I was overwhelmed wid pride, as my shoulders raised n breasts- more thrust. I was sick Wid Pride-But, later did I realize- as I climbed everyone's history, dat each one of them was adorned wid thy same-same kinda guards- saluting!

    My Pride Went Pale as I came to know thy uniqueness of lyf- no one is less than thy other, better shrug off thy self-*pride* n learn to accept thy reality of thy Self!!

    Be thy self, thou compromise n tame yr behavior- each passing day 'd make u realize u r not thy final entity n there s more to explore!!
    Cheers

    ❤️

    ~ElaRa​
    Honey bunch

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    Vennilavu saral nee
    Vesum kulir kaadhal nee
    Aasai vanthu aasai theera
    Aadugindra oonjal nee

    Kottum pani maayam nee
    Kodai veyil saayam nee
    Thulli vilaiyaadum anbil
    Thoogaiyaagum kaalam nee

    Minnal modhum vaasal neeyae
    Chellamaana meeral neeyae
    Nenjame yengum thedal nee

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    Honey bunch

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    Happy New Year, @ℇlαᖇα

    Wishing you a wonderful year ahead filled with happiness, laughter, and new this year bring you everything you hope for and more.

    Have a fantastic year, and I’m excited to see you grow and shine! May you always find joy in the little things and discover new dreams to chase.

    Keep exploring, learning, and embracing every moment with a smile. I know this year will be full of amazing memories and bright moments for
    you!

    :inlove:​
    NEPTUNE
    Many a tym
    it's not abt *many* relations dat U develop worths!
    It's just *one* true bond who can Understand U n give a shoulder for U to find peace.
    Yhm needa accept dat :
    *donn expect people to behave towards u as U do towards them*
    #h'ppyx'maskudoos!
    :rofl1:
    Kudos: (
    ~ElaRa    ​
    Honey bunch

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    மழை மழை என் உலகத்தில் வருகின்ற
    முதல் மழை     நீ முதல் மழை
    அலை அலை என் இதயத்தில் அடிக்கின்ற
    முதல் அலை என் முதல் அலை


    :heart1:​
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