The Unwritten Path

[JalJala]

Don’t just follow what others say;
Walk your own path, in your own way.
What others teach might miss the mark,
But what you discover ignites your spark.

Trophies tarnish, and applause will fade,
But the lessons learned are the tools you've made.
Hard times may bend you, but not for long;
They test you and make you wise and strong.

Neither fear the fall nor fear the climb;
Every step reveals new truths in time.
No shame, no guilt, learn and grow;
Life's journey is a road yet untold.

What you've learned is yours to keep;
The wisdom gained, the truth you’ve seen.
Life unfolds with each step you take;
The path ahead is yours to shape.

 

[Drofhrts]

 

[Vilen]

Don’t just follow what others say;
Walk your own path, in your own way.
What others teach might miss the mark,
But what you discover ignites your spark.

Trophies tarnish, and applause will fade,
But the lessons learned are the tools you've made.
Hard times may bend you, but not for long;
They test you and make you wise and strong.

Neither fear the fall nor fear the climb;
Every step reveals new truths in time.
No shame, no guilt, learn and grow;
Life's journey is a road yet untold.

What you've learned is yours to keep;
The wisdom gained, the truth you’ve seen.
Life unfolds with each step you take;
The path ahead is yours to shape.

Osm bro...

 

[Vilen]

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True....

 

[URum]

Don’t just follow what others say;
Walk your own path, in your own way.
What others teach might miss the mark,
But what you discover ignites your spark.

Trophies tarnish, and applause will fade,
But the lessons learned are the tools you've made.
Hard times may bend you, but not for long;
They test you and make you wise and strong.

Neither fear the fall nor fear the climb;
Every step reveals new truths in time.
No shame, no guilt, learn and grow;
Life's journey is a road yet untold.

What you've learned is yours to keep;
The wisdom gained, the truth you’ve seen.
Life unfolds with each step you take;
The path ahead is yours to shape.

Amazing, here is my take on ur lines may not be as good as urs

I Walk down the long long road
One I'm not even sure of,
Cause there's nowhere else to go
And I've got nothing to show.

For all these years of my life
I've struggled, I've fought
I've seen others around fallin'
But I'm still standing

I stand at crossroads
Coz I don't know where to go
I'm uncertain of what to do
And I don't know what I want

For many years I've done
What others have told me to
I've seen others lose their way
But I'm still standing

Inspite of all these ups and downs
I've held on, I've held my ground
People pushing me around
Contradicting everything I say.
Life hasn't been a cakewalk
It's not easy, it’s not a bed of roses
People say they're always there
Most of the time we're all alone.

The world around me is crumblin'
People fallin'...
Love endin'...
Relationships burnin'
But I'm still standing

 

[JalJala]

Osm bro...

Thanks, you brother, for taking the time to read it! Your support really means a lot, and I’m so grateful for your wonderful feedback on the poem.

 

[JalJala]

Amazing, here is my take on ur lines may not be as good as urs

I Walk down the long long road
One I'm not even sure of,
Cause there's nowhere else to go
And I've got nothing to show.

For all these years of my life
I've struggled, I've fought
I've seen others around fallin'
But I'm still standing

I stand at crossroads
Coz I don't know where to go
I'm uncertain of what to do
And I don't know what I want

For many years I've done
What others have told me to
I've seen others lose their way
But I'm still standing

Inspite of all these ups and downs
I've held on, I've held my ground
People pushing me around
Contradicting everything I say.
Life hasn't been a cakewalk
It's not easy, it’s not a bed of roses
People say they're always there
Most of the time we're all alone.

The world around me is crumblin'
People fallin'...
Love endin'...
Relationships burnin'
But I'm still standing

Thank you, brother, for taking the time to read the poem. Your support truly means a lot, and I’m so grateful for your wonderful feedback. Everyone has their own unique taste, so comparisons don’t really matter. By the way, I loved your poem too!

 

[Rockzz ✨श्वेतराग✨]

Don’t just follow what others say;
Walk your own path, in your own way.
What others teach might miss the mark,
But what you discover ignites your spark.

Trophies tarnish, and applause will fade,
But the lessons learned are the tools you've made.
Hard times may bend you, but not for long;
They test you and make you wise and strong.

Neither fear the fall nor fear the climb;
Every step reveals new truths in time.
No shame, no guilt, learn and grow;
Life's journey is a road yet untold.

What you've learned is yours to keep;
The wisdom gained, the truth you’ve seen.
Life unfolds with each step you take;
The path ahead is yours to shape.

Lovely

 

[JalJala]

Lovely

Thank you, my dear friend, for taking the time to read it! Your support means a lot, and I’m grateful for your lovely feedback on the poem.