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The Trip - that never ends
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Nala iruku jomHelo all,
Hope everyone is doing good.
It’s been long time into thread and just got spark about a story line. Just want to share with you all.
Read and feel the experience of
The Trip
Before getting into play- let me intro you the cast in this episode
View attachment 262589 Ashwin as Gautam
View attachment 262590Pavithra as Ramya
View attachment 262591Rakshan as Siva
View attachment 262592VJ Vishal as Gokul
View attachment 262593 Dhanya Bala krishnan as sravya
View attachment 262594misha as viji
Episode 1- The Gang’s meet up
On a Friday eve around 5 15 pm…
In a corporate office at Coimbatore,
Everyone are about to complete their daily works , some on calls and some f them packing up things to leave office in a hurry burry.
When the view comes out f the office, there is a little bit traffic and vehicles are in slow moving.
Our view moves on and looks like there was some crowd with bit of tension around in a busy road.
Just a stranger1 entered into that crowd with a question
Ena aachu ???
Stranger 2: bike accident sir, ipo tha ambulance vandhuchu.
When stranger1 rushed into the accident spot, he can saw only the damaged bike. Nearby Ramya was standing with eyes filled in tears and searching for something (may be her phone). Her face full of some tension with a suffering.
& the back doors of ambulance closed in a hurry and rushed away.
Then at the same time in Gautam’s apartment …
He is packing things along with his friends (siva, gokul, sravya)
Siva : macha …. Sekaro pack panu da …. Inu 20 min la la cab vandhurum.
But orae oru request, marriage ku munnala ithu unoda last bachelor party .. Goa la… Un fiance (Ramya) kooda varanga .. so thavayu senju angayu vandhu laptop on panna mavanae kondruvaen.
Gokul: nalla vela sonna da Macha, ilana avan athayum bağ la eduthu vachalum vapan.
Gautam: ila da. Apdi lam edhuvum nadaka koodathunu tha ! Laptop office layae vachutu vantaen!
Siva: oho un aal varanadhum…. X gf uh office layae kalati vitutiya da !
Sravya: Gautam, athellam irukatum - Ramya ku call paniya…. Ena da plan ??
Gautam: haah athellam all set.
Ramya n viji direct uh station vandhuruvanga… on d way la call panni ketukalam…
Siva: sari .. apo naan cab enga nu track panni vara solraen … (takes his phone and moving away… ) helo naaa .., enga irukeengaaaaa
Gautam phone rings….
He attended and in few minutes then freezed with a weird look.
Gokul: yaar da phone la ??? ena aachu ???
Who was at the other end ??
To be continued
onnonna padichukrenGood one and keep up the good writing
Detail and descriptive narration Neat work and clear character introduction 
ivalo write panuvingala jom good good
Neat work and clear character introduction ivalo write panuvingala jom good good
Detail and descriptive narration
Aww !! Thanks kadal kanni !!
It’s my first story !!
Really good startAww !! Thanks kadal kanni !!
It’s my first story !!
Write more and more kadal kannan
Next epo eluthuvinga
Therilayae kadal kanni ! ……Next epo eluthuvinga
Well narrated dearie. Apt casting I feel.... way 2 go ... looking 4wrd to watch more thru ur eyes and words... may b a one liner or caption to start with for each narration wud add delight... - madhi chellamHelo all,
Hope everyone is doing good.
It’s been long time into thread and just got spark about a story line. Just want to share with you all.
Read and feel the experience of
The Trip
Before getting into play- let me intro you the cast in this episode
View attachment 262589 Ashwin as Gautam
View attachment 262590Pavithra as Ramya
View attachment 262591Rakshan as Siva
View attachment 262592VJ Vishal as Gokul
View attachment 262593 Dhanya Bala krishnan as sravya
View attachment 262594misha as viji
Episode 1- The Gang’s meet up
On a Friday eve around 5 15 pm…
In a corporate office at Coimbatore,
Everyone are about to complete their daily works , some on calls and some f them packing up things to leave office in a hurry burry.
When the view comes out f the office, there is a little bit traffic and vehicles are in slow moving.
Our view moves on and looks like there was some crowd with bit of tension around in a busy road.
Just a stranger1 entered into that crowd with a question
Ena aachu ???
Stranger 2: bike accident sir, ipo tha ambulance vandhuchu.
When stranger1 rushed into the accident spot, he can saw only the damaged bike. Nearby Ramya was standing with eyes filled in tears and searching for something (may be her phone). Her face full of some tension with a suffering.
& the back doors of ambulance closed in a hurry and rushed away.
Then at the same time in Gautam’s apartment …
He is packing things along with his friends (siva, gokul, sravya)
Siva : macha …. Sekaro pack panu da …. Inu 20 min la la cab vandhurum.
But orae oru request, marriage ku munnala ithu unoda last bachelor party .. Goa la… Un fiance (Ramya) kooda varanga .. so thavayu senju angayu vandhu laptop on panna mavanae kondruvaen.
Gokul: nalla vela sonna da Macha, ilana avan athayum bağ la eduthu vachalum vapan.
Gautam: ila da. Apdi lam edhuvum nadaka koodathunu tha ! Laptop office layae vachutu vantaen
Siva: oho un aal varanadhum…. X gf uh office layae kalati vitutiya da !
Sravya: Gautam, athellam irukatum - Ramya ku call paniya…. Ena da plan ??
Gautam: haah athellam all set.
Ramya n viji direct uh station vandhuruvanga… on d way la call panni ketukalam…
Siva: sari .. apo naan cab enga nu track panni vara solraen … (takes his phone and moving away… ) helo naaa .., enga irukeengaaaaa
Gautam phone rings….
He attended and in few minutes then freezed with a weird look.
Gokul: yaar da phone la ??? ena aachu ???
Who was at the other end ??
To be continued
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