Storming out

[Freaky]

I was burning with unspoken words,
He was hiding behind winter’s cold.
I kept chasing around the turns,
And he would disappear in icy folds.

He said I was everything he wanted
But not something for the keeps
Like water in a parching desert
And he was an empty vessel that seeps

The rain swallowed my tears,
Then dropped them at his feet.
But he stood unfazed by the storms,
While I kept grasping at what couldn't meet

He said ours was a story
Of a broken record on repeat
The wind howled like a constant ache,
While the cold settled in my heart, in defeat

So like the autumn leaves,
I let go of his branches behind,
And found a place where I could breathe,
Where the storm could no longer find.



~just because...
~also it's been a while
~tryna flow

 

[criss cross]

I was burning with unspoken words,
He was hiding behind winter’s cold.
I kept chasing around the turns,
And he would disappear in icy folds.

He said I was everything he wanted
But not something for the keeps
Like water in a parching desert
And he was an empty vessel that seeps

The rain swallowed my tears,
Then dropped them at his feet.
But he stood unfazed by the storms,
While I kept grasping at what couldn't meet

He said ours was a story
Of a broken record on repeat
The wind howled like a constant ache,
While the cold settled in my heart, in defeat

So like the autumn leaves,
I let go of his branches behind,
And found a place where I could breathe,
Where the storm could no longer find.



~just because...
~also it's been a while
~tryna flow

That’s beautifully written — full of quiet heartbreak and strength. Letting go never sounded so poetic.

 

[Nightwing]

I was burning with unspoken words,
He was hiding behind winter’s cold.
I kept chasing around the turns,
And he would disappear in icy folds.

He said I was everything he wanted
But not something for the keeps
Like water in a parching desert
And he was an empty vessel that seeps

The rain swallowed my tears,
Then dropped them at his feet.
But he stood unfazed by the storms,
While I kept grasping at what couldn't meet

He said ours was a story
Of a broken record on repeat
The wind howled like a constant ache,
While the cold settled in my heart, in defeat

So like the autumn leaves,
I let go of his branches behind,
And found a place where I could breathe,
Where the storm could no longer find.



~just because...
~also it's been a while
~tryna flow

 

[EkaLustYa]

Good to see Freaky is back with a freakish bang!

 

[Nemo]

beautifully written

 

[Anshhi]

I was burning with unspoken words,
He was hiding behind winter’s cold.
I kept chasing around the turns,
And he would disappear in icy folds.

He said I was everything he wanted
But not something for the keeps
Like water in a parching desert
And he was an empty vessel that seeps

The rain swallowed my tears,
Then dropped them at his feet.
But he stood unfazed by the storms,
While I kept grasping at what couldn't meet

He said ours was a story
Of a broken record on repeat
The wind howled like a constant ache,
While the cold settled in my heart, in defeat

So like the autumn leaves,
I let go of his branches behind,
And found a place where I could breathe,
Where the storm could no longer find.



~just because...
~also it's been a while
~tryna flow

Your poem is a poignant and relatable exploration of love, loss, and self-discovery and Your poem is a powerful exploration of the pain and longing that can accompany unrequited love or a mismatched relationship.
*A_AICS