Stand still

[BellaLuna]

I stand tall, didn't bow
I stand still, as if
A necrosed foot
The wind of autumn ruined
My peace.

But me!
I remained still,
Like the dead.
I whisper to my heart,
"A little more patience."
I never complain
For the leaves that left me.
I stand tall,
Watching them leave me,
One by one.
I stand still,
For every leaf that sinks
Into the soil.

But now,
I'm tired.
My heart bleeds,
And my feet ache.
Oh! not necrosed but alive,
I stand still,
I stand tall.

 

[criss cross]

I stand tall, didn't bow
I stand still, as if
A necrosed foot
The wind of autumn ruined
My peace.

But me!
I remained still,
Like the dead.
I whisper to my heart,
"A little more patience."
I never complain
For the leaves that left me.
I stand tall,
Watching them leave me,
One by one.
I stand still,
For every leaf that sinks
Into the soil.

But now,
I'm tired.
My heart bleeds,
And my feet ache.
Oh! not necrosed but alive,
I stand still,
I stand tall.

Still I stand, though weary and worn,
Roots deep, though my heart is torn.
Leaves may leave, the winds may call,
Yet here I stand—tired, but tall.

 

[BellaLuna]

Still I stand, though weary and worn,
Roots deep, though my heart is torn.
Leaves may leave, the winds may call,
Yet here I stand—tired, but tall.

You wrote better

 

[criss cross]

You wrote better

Tq

 

[Pearl Beach]

Babeee...Ur poetry is alwys soo Simple.
I love how u don't complicate ur posts - Envy u!
I am a drama queen and I can never be this crisp...

Coming to Ur Tree-Tale,
Ur fallen leaves carry the weight similar to that of my broken heart...
Infact aaallll our broken hearts find reflection in the nature...
That's y wen no one understands us, the nature does...!!

So like I alwys say, Run to the Treeeesss wen u r in tears...​

 

[BellaLuna]

Babeee...Ur poetry is alwys soo Simple.
I love how u don't complicate ur posts - Envy u!
I am a drama queen and I can never be this crisp...

Coming to Ur Tree-Tale,
Ur fallen leaves carry the weight similar to that of my broken heart...
Infact aaallll our broken hearts find reflection in the nature...
That's y wen no one understands us, the nature does...!!

So like I alwys say, Run to the Treeeesss wen u r in tears...​

My english teacher used to say
You're a good writer if your write-up's are simple with a good meaning
Just following her


Nature is love
And peace.

 

[Nemo]

well written @BellaLuna very true and relatable

@criss cross also well written

two very different ways to get the raw emotions behind the words written to be conveyed to the wider audience

 

[BellaLuna]

I am a drama queen and I can never be this crisp...

We are created equal with different abilities

 

[criss cross]

well written @BellaLuna very true and relatable

@criss cross also well written

two very different ways to get the raw emotions behind the words written to be conveyed to the wider audience

Tq

 

[JAXY]

I stand tall, didn't bow
I stand still, as if
A necrosed foot
The wind of autumn ruined
My peace.

But me!
I remained still,
Like the dead.
I whisper to my heart,
"A little more patience."
I never complain
For the leaves that left me.
I stand tall,
Watching them leave me,
One by one.
I stand still,
For every leaf that sinks
Into the soil.

But now,
I'm tired.
My heart bleeds,
And my feet ache.
Oh! not necrosed but alive,
I stand still,
I stand tall.

Just like Jaxy



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[BellaLuna]

Just like Jaxy

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Didn't I told you, I learnt a lot from you
Still learning
My sweet sweetie pie

 

[Vikash]

I stand tall, didn't bow
I stand still, as if
A necrosed foot
The wind of autumn ruined
My peace.

But me!
I remained still,
Like the dead.
I whisper to my heart,
"A little more patience."
I never complain
For the leaves that left me.
I stand tall,
Watching them leave me,
One by one.
I stand still,
For every leaf that sinks
Into the soil.

But now,
I'm tired.
My heart bleeds,
And my feet ache.
Oh! not necrosed but alive,
I stand still,
I stand tall.

Waah..! Fantastic poem, inspiring! big applause..!!

 

[BellaLuna]

Waah..! Fantastic poem, inspiring! big applause..!!

Thank you Vikash

 

[Honey bunch]

I stand tall, didn't bow
I stand still, as if
A necrosed foot
The wind of autumn ruined
My peace.

But me!
I remained still,
Like the dead.
I whisper to my heart,
"A little more patience."
I never complain
For the leaves that left me.
I stand tall,
Watching them leave me,
One by one.
I stand still,
For every leaf that sinks
Into the soil.

But now,
I'm tired.
My heart bleeds,
And my feet ache.
Oh! not necrosed but alive,
I stand still,
I stand tall.

Still, I stand, though my heart may ache,
Holding love, for love’s own sake.
Winds may whisper, storms may cry,
Yet I stand strong, I don’t ask why.


Leaves may leave, but I remain,
Not with anger, not with pain.
For love endures, though time may bend,
I stand, I stay without an end.


No matter what, my love remains.

 

[BellaLuna]

Still, I stand, though my heart may ache,
Holding love, for love’s own sake.
Winds may whisper, storms may cry,
Yet I stand strong, I don’t ask why.


Leaves may leave, but I remain,
Not with anger, not with pain.
For love endures, though time may bend,
I stand, I stay without an end.


No matter what, my love remains.

I stand strong, I don't ask why.......

 

[BAjith]

I stand tall, didn't bow
I stand still, as if
A necrosed foot
The wind of autumn ruined
My peace.

But me!
I remained still,
Like the dead.
I whisper to my heart,
"A little more patience."
I never complain
For the leaves that left me.
I stand tall,
Watching them leave me,
One by one.
I stand still,
For every leaf that sinks
Into the soil.

But now,
I'm tired.
My heart bleeds,
And my feet ache.
Oh! not necrosed but alive,
I stand still,
I stand tall.

Let Autumn Wind Up and Spring Blooms

 

[SPIRIT]

I stand tall, didn't bow
I stand still, as if
A necrosed foot
The wind of autumn ruined
My peace.

But me!
I remained still,
Like the dead.
I whisper to my heart,
"A little more patience."
I never complain
For the leaves that left me.
I stand tall,
Watching them leave me,
One by one.
I stand still,
For every leaf that sinks
Into the soil.

But now,
I'm tired.
My heart bleeds,
And my feet ache.
Oh! not necrosed but alive,
I stand still,
I stand tall.

This one is magnificent and profound. We can learn love from a tree or the person who planted the tree knowing they are never gonna take shelter under the tree nor receive its fruits yet planted it so that others can get it. Very well written!

 

[Anshhi]

I stand tall, didn't bow
I stand still, as if
A necrosed foot
The wind of autumn ruined
My peace.

But me!
I remained still,
Like the dead.
I whisper to my heart,
"A little more patience."
I never complain
For the leaves that left me.
I stand tall,
Watching them leave me,
One by one.
I stand still,
For every leaf that sinks
Into the soil.

But now,
I'm tired.
My heart bleeds,
And my feet ache.
Oh! not necrosed but alive,
I stand still,
I stand tall.

This poem is a masterpiece of emotional depth and resilience and testament to the human spirit's capacity for endurance, hope, and resilience.

Thank you for sharing this powerful and moving piece!
*A_AICS