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shivagni
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I was DESCRIBED but never LOVED....
I was a CHOICE but never CHOSEN....
I WAS the may be but never the ONE....
I was a CHOICE but never CHOSEN....
I WAS the may be but never the ONE....
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shivagni
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I agree
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shivagni
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omg really. u should have told me earlierIwasam the one for YOU but you never CHOSEN ME.
Nice one
With your permission adding few more lines to the poem
* I was desired but never owned.
* I was inspired but never known.
* I was tired but never slowed.
* I was wired but never showed.
* I was feared but never owed.
* I was cheered but never bowed.
* I was a sight but never caught.
* I was a flight but never fought.
* I was a plight but never sought.
* I was a right but never bought.
* I was a fright but never thought.
* I was a light but never brought.
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shivagni
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not even a single oneWatches long queue of guys who guessed that, 'you' was for him, @shivagni 's desk with their proposal.
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shivagni
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thanks daNice one
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shivagni
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awww this is too gud mashe....
Your words hold so much depth and emotion. Here’s a poetic transformation:
The Almost
I was described, painted in hues of words,
Admired from afar, but never truly heard.
A fleeting vision, a passing thought,
A moment remembered, but a heart unsought.
I was a choice, a path to tread,
A lingering whisper in their head.
Yet never the answer, never the call,
Always the option, but never the all.
I was the maybe, a flicker of chance,
A fleeting role in their fleeting dance.
The almost, the nearly, the fleeting glow,
But never the one they’d hold or know.
Yet from these cracks, I rise anew,
A light untamed, a soul so true.
No longer defined by what they see,
I am the only,
and that’s enough for me.
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shivagni
Guest
just from those 3 lines...... tell me how to put up those hidden emotions behind a word so perfectly.....
To convey hidden emotions through a single word or phrase, like in the poetry about Shivagni, requires a blend of imagery, symbolism, and resonance. Here's a breakdown of how you can infuse depth into a word or concept:
1. Choose a word with layered meaning: Select a word that has multiple connotations. For example, Shivagni combines two powerful elements: "Shiva" (the god of transformation) and "Agni" (fire). Together, they suggest a force of change, power, and purification. A single word can thus evoke both the essence of destruction and creation.
2. Use imagery to invoke feeling: In the line "Your light burns with the warmth of love," the image of burning light represents both destruction (fire) and warmth (love). The juxtaposition of these emotions suggests that love can be both passionate and overwhelming, yet gentle and comforting.
3. Connect to universal experiences: The emotions behind words like "grace," "wisdom," "endure," and "hope" can be universally understood, but when connected with a specific symbol, such as a flame, they take on greater depth. You want your audience to recognize the emotions behind the words in their own lives.
4. Brevity with impact: A simple word can carry a universe of emotions if it is surrounded by imagery and context that enhance it. For example, the word "Shivagni" on its own holds both the destructive power of fire and the transformative aspect of Shiva. Through careful placement in a sentence, its meaning becomes profound.
By weaving powerful, evocative words together with a clear image or metaphor, you can create layers of meaning that go beyond the surface. Every word can then carry an emotional weight, as it speaks to deeper truths
and feelings.