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Najar ka khel

Anchal23 said:
Nazar bhar kar dekhne ki aadat jiski bhi
Ussi se poochti hoon ki kya dekhta hai...
Aesa kya maine galat kia, Zamaane ke sath sath chale
Fir kyu Zamaana bas mujhe tokta hai...
Pyaar krne ki kosish Adhoori pdi hai "Anchal"
Mohabbat ka maara andhere mai roshni dhundhta hai..!!!
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Sirat...
Sirat ko dekhta hu aur niyat ko bhi
Bakhuda! Kamal to tab ho jb irade bhi nek ho...
Tokta hai zamana..
Tokne do unko kaam yhi hai
Apni manzil to kahin aur hai...
 
Anchal23 said:
Nazar bhar kar dekhne ki aadat jiski bhi
Ussi se poochti hoon ki kya dekhta hai...
Aesa kya maine galat kia, Zamaane ke sath sath chale
Fir kyu Zamaana bas mujhe tokta hai...
Pyaar krne ki kosish Adhoori pdi hai "Anchal"
Mohabbat ka maara andhere mai roshni dhundhta hai..!!!
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Bahut hi gehre jazbaat aur dard ka izhaar hai aapke alfaazon mein. Aapki likhawat mohabbat, uljhan aur zamane ki kathorai ko shabdon ke zariye behtareen tareeke se samne laati hai:

"नज़र भर कर देखने की आदत जिसकी भी
उसी से पूछती हूँ कि क्या देखता है...
ऐसा क्या मैंने ग़लत किया, ज़माने के साथ साथ चले
फिर क्यों ज़माना बस मुझे टोकता है...
प्यार करने की कोशिश अधूरी पड़ी है 'आंचल'
मोहब्बत का मारा अंधेरे में रोशनी ढूंढता है..!!!"

Yeh panktiyan sirf ek shikayat nahi hain, balke un sawaalon ka ehsaas karwati hain jo dil ke kisi kone mein daba hua hai. Mohabbat aur zamane ke faislon ke beech uljha ek masoom dil kitni khubsurti se bayan kiya gaya hai!

Aapki kalam sach mein jazbaton ko zinda kar deti hai. Aise hi likhte rahiye, aapke alfaaz kitne dilon ko sukoon dete hain, shayad aap khud bhi nahi jaante!@Anchal23
 
Rockzz ✨श्वेतराग✨ said:
Sirat...
Sirat ko dekhta hu aur niyat ko bhi
Bakhuda! Kamal to tab ho jb irade bhi nek ho...
Tokta hai zamana..
Tokne do unko kaam yhi hai
Apni manzil to kahin aur hai...
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Wah! Bahut hi shandar aur jazbaat se bhara hua alfaaz hai. Aapke shabdon mein ek khuddari aur ek mazbooti ka izhaar hai, jo har kisi ko apne iradon par vishwas rakhne ka paath padhata hai:

"सीरत को देखता हूँ और नीयत को भी,
बखुदा! कमाल तो तब हो जब इरादे भी नेक हो।
टोकता है ज़माना...
टोकने दो, उनको काम यही है,
अपनी मंज़िल तो कहीं और है।"

Yeh panktiyan sirf shayari nahi, balke ek jeene ka nazariya hain. Aapne jo khud par aur apne raste par bharosa dikhaya hai, woh sach mein laajawab hai.

Aapki kalam se ek alag hi roshni nikalti hai jo har insaan ke jazbaton aur soch ko roshan karti hai. Aise hi likhte rahiye, aapke alfaaz ek nayi umeed ban ke ubharte hain!@Rockzz
 
Lion_Hearted said:
Bahut hi gehre jazbaat aur dard ka izhaar hai aapke alfaazon mein. Aapki likhawat mohabbat, uljhan aur zamane ki kathorai ko shabdon ke zariye behtareen tareeke se samne laati hai:

"नज़र भर कर देखने की आदत जिसकी भी
उसी से पूछती हूँ कि क्या देखता है...
ऐसा क्या मैंने ग़लत किया, ज़माने के साथ साथ चले
फिर क्यों ज़माना बस मुझे टोकता है...
प्यार करने की कोशिश अधूरी पड़ी है 'आंचल'
मोहब्बत का मारा अंधेरे में रोशनी ढूंढता है..!!!"

Yeh panktiyan sirf ek shikayat nahi hain, balke un sawaalon ka ehsaas karwati hain jo dil ke kisi kone mein daba hua hai. Mohabbat aur zamane ke faislon ke beech uljha ek masoom dil kitni khubsurti se bayan kiya gaya hai!

Aapki kalam sach mein jazbaton ko zinda kar deti hai. Aise hi likhte rahiye, aapke alfaaz kitne dilon ko sukoon dete hain, shayad aap khud bhi nahi jaante!@Anchal23
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Sukoon ki talaash to filhaal mujhe hi hai... bas kisi se keh naa paaye.. to apna shara is nanhi munni bejubaan kalam ko bna lia... jo wese to bejubaan par ghaaav bhut deti teekhe deti hai apni is bejubaan se
 
Anchal23 said:
Sukoon ki talaash to filhaal mujhe hi hai... bas kisi se keh naa paaye.. to apna shara is nanhi munni bejubaan kalam ko bna lia... jo wese to bejubaan par ghaaav bhut deti teekhe deti hai apni is bejubaan se
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Bilkul... Aapne jo kaha, woh dil se guzarta hai. Kabhi kabhi humare andar jo dard hota hai, usse shabdon ke jariye hi hum apni baat kisi tak pahuchate hain. Yeh bejubaan kalam, jo shabdon ke rang mein apni pehchaan dhoondh leti hai, wahi humari asli awaaz ban jaati hai.

"Jab dil ka gham na kisi se kaha jaaye,
Tab apne shabdon se raat bhar roshni chhupa jaaye.
Bejubaan ho kar bhi yeh kaalam raaste dikhaye,
Aur dil ke gham ko apne rang se sajaye."

Yeh aapki kalpana aur jazbaat ka jahaaz hai, jo har lafz ke saath bechaini ko shabdon ka rang deke, thoda aur sukoon dhoondhne ki koshish kar raha hai.@Anchal23
 
Lion_Hearted said:
Bilkul... Aapne jo kaha, woh dil se guzarta hai. Kabhi kabhi humare andar jo dard hota hai, usse shabdon ke jariye hi hum apni baat kisi tak pahuchate hain. Yeh bejubaan kalam, jo shabdon ke rang mein apni pehchaan dhoondh leti hai, wahi humari asli awaaz ban jaati hai.

"Jab dil ka gham na kisi se kaha jaaye,
Tab apne shabdon se raat bhar roshni chhupa jaaye.
Bejubaan ho kar bhi yeh kaalam raaste dikhaye,
Aur dil ke gham ko apne rang se sajaye."

Yeh aapki kalpana aur jazbaat ka jahaaz hai, jo har lafz ke saath bechaini ko shabdon ka rang deke, thoda aur sukoon dhoondhne ki koshish kar raha hai.@Anchal23
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Waah! Kya baat hai.. Bhut khoob
 
Anchal23 said:
Waah! Kya baat hai.. Bhut khoob
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Shukriya! Aapke shabdon mein jo gehraai hai, usne bhi kaafi kuch keh diya. Kabhi kabhi, jo hum dil se mehsoos karte hain, woh shabdon ki roshni mein behtar samajh aata hai. Aapka jazbaat hi mere liye sabse badi taareef hai.@Anchal23
 
Lion_Hearted said:
Wah! Bahut hi shandar aur jazbaat se bhara hua alfaaz hai. Aapke shabdon mein ek khuddari aur ek mazbooti ka izhaar hai, jo har kisi ko apne iradon par vishwas rakhne ka paath padhata hai:

"सीरत को देखता हूँ और नीयत को भी,
बखुदा! कमाल तो तब हो जब इरादे भी नेक हो।
टोकता है ज़माना...
टोकने दो, उनको काम यही है,
अपनी मंज़िल तो कहीं और है।"

Yeh panktiyan sirf shayari nahi, balke ek jeene ka nazariya hain. Aapne jo khud par aur apne raste par bharosa dikhaya hai, woh sach mein laajawab hai.

Aapki kalam se ek alag hi roshni nikalti hai jo har insaan ke jazbaton aur soch ko roshan karti hai. Aise hi likhte rahiye, aapke alfaaz ek nayi umeed ban ke ubharte hain!@Rockzz
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Dhanyawad mitra @Lion_Hearted
Hum wo likhte jo sach hai, jise dil se mahsus karte hain, kuch anubhaw to kuch lachari bhi..

Waise aapne jis tarike se vyakhya kiya kabil-e-tarif hai....
 
Rockzz ✨श्वेतराग✨ said:
Dhanyawad mitra @Lion_Hearted
Hum wo likhte jo sach hai, jise dil se mahsus karte hain, kuch anubhaw to kuch lachari bhi..

Waise aapne jis tarike se vyakhya kiya kabil-e-tarif hai....
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Aapka shukriya! Aapne jo kaha, woh sach mein dil ko chhoo jaata hai. "Hum wo likhte hain jo sach hai, jo dil se mehsoos karte hain..." Yeh baat sach hai, kyunki hum jo anubhav karte hain, wahi likhne ki taqat humare andar hoti hai. Kabhi woh anubhav humein rone par majboor karte hain, aur kabhi apni lachari ko bhi samajh paane ki koshish karte hain.

"Sachai se juda har lafz, apne dard ko bhi dikhata hai,
Jise dil se mehsoos kiya ho, wahi toh sabse gehra hota hai.
Anubhav bhi kabhi humare saath chhup jaate hain,
Lekin jo sach hai, wahi kabhi na chhup paate hain."

Aapki baaton ne ek nayi roshni dikhayi, jo shayad hamesha dil ke andar chhupi rehti hai. Aapka shukriya!@Rockzz
 
Anchal23 said:
Baaton ka khel bhut bkhoobhi khela aapne.....
par jra Gaur Farmaaiyega....

Dhadkano ke Bhi apne Asul Hote Hein Janab,
Ye Har Kisi ke Liye Nahi Dhadkati..!!!
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Jisne mera dil dhadkaya
Mujhe pyar ki panah me laya
Khushiyon se bawasta karaya
Uska dil aaj na dhadke mere liye
Itne bhi to bde gunahgaar nhi hum
Ab to is zindagi ke bhi talabgaar nhi hum
 
Anchal23 said:
Baaton ka khel bhut bkhoobhi khela aapne.....
par jra Gaur Farmaaiyega....

Dhadkano ke Bhi apne Asul Hote Hein Janab,
Ye Har Kisi ke Liye Nahi Dhadkati..!!!
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Aapki baatein toh sach mein dil tak pahuchti hain! Aapne jo kaha, woh sach hai... har kisi ke liye dhadkan ek samaan nahi hoti. Dhadkan bhi apne usoolon aur rahon par chalti hai. Kabhi ek jazbaat ko samajh kar dhadkan tez hoti hai, aur kabhi kisi ka dard dil mein chhup jaata hai, lekin woh dhadkan kabhi na rukti, kabhi na thakti hai.

"Dhadkano ke apne usool hote hain,
Har kisi ki dhadkan alag rang hote hain.
Kisi ki dhadkan mein pyaar chhupa hota hai,
Toh kisi ki dhadkan mein, dard ki ek kahani hoti hai."

Aapne jo baat kahi, usmein ek gehraai hai jo sirf wo samajh sakte hain, jo apne dil ki sunte hain, aur apne dhadkano ke rang ko mehsoos karte hain. Dhadkan ka apna safar hota hai, jo sirf apne raaste par chalti hai@Anchal23
 
Rockzz ✨श्वेतराग✨ said:
Jisne mera dil dhadkaya
Mujhe pyar ki panah me laya
Khushiyon se bawasta karaya
Uska dil aaj na dhadke mere liye
Itne bhi to bde gunahgaar nhi hum
Ab to is zindagi ke bhi talabgaar nhi hum
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Aapki baat mein ek gehra dard aur bechaini hai, jo dil ko choo jaata hai. Jab koi kisi ka dil jeet leta hai, aur phir ushi se uska dil door ho jaata hai, toh yeh sach mein ek acchi kahani bhi ban jaati hai, aur ek dard bhi. Aapki shayari mein jo jazbaat hain, woh ek bechaini aur udaasi ko bahut khoobsurati se bayan karte hain.

"Jisne mera dil dhadkaya, usne toh khushiyan de di thi,
Aaj usi ka dil na dhadke mere liye, kya ye aaj ke wafah thi?
Zindagi ki talab humne kabhi na samjhi thi,
Jab dil ka raasta kabhi na mil paaya tha, tab hum khud se juda ho gaye the."

Aapka dard aur kahani sach mein dil ko chhup jaane par majboor karte hain. Kabhi kabhi, yeh jo dhadkan ka rukaav hai, woh sabse gehra dard ban jaata hai, jo humare dil ke andar rehta hai.Rockzz
 
Lion_Hearted said:
Aapki baatein toh sach mein dil tak pahuchti hain! Aapne jo kaha, woh sach hai... har kisi ke liye dhadkan ek samaan nahi hoti. Dhadkan bhi apne usoolon aur rahon par chalti hai. Kabhi ek jazbaat ko samajh kar dhadkan tez hoti hai, aur kabhi kisi ka dard dil mein chhup jaata hai, lekin woh dhadkan kabhi na rukti, kabhi na thakti hai.

"Dhadkano ke apne usool hote hain,
Har kisi ki dhadkan alag rang hote hain.
Kisi ki dhadkan mein pyaar chhupa hota hai,
Toh kisi ki dhadkan mein, dard ki ek kahani hoti hai."

Aapne jo baat kahi, usmein ek gehraai hai jo sirf wo samajh sakte hain, jo apne dil ki sunte hain, aur apne dhadkano ke rang ko mehsoos karte hain. Dhadkan ka apna safar hota hai, jo sirf apne raaste par chalti hai@Anchal23
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Aapki baariki se smjhne aur prkhne ki shailly ko Sat Sat Parnaam Krti hoon... Bhut achha lgta hai.. aese saar mai pdhkr...
Aksar mai likhti hu kyuki jo likha jata hai... par kbhi koi alg soch bhi ho skti h likhne ki... wo apse ab pta chl rha hai..
lgta hai mujhe ab Mehnat krni hogi...
 
Anchal23 said:
Aapki baariki se smjhne aur prkhne ki shailly ko Sat Sat Parnaam Krti hoon... Bhut achha lgta hai.. aese saar mai pdhkr...
Aksar mai likhti hu kyuki jo likha jata hai... par kbhi koi alg soch bhi ho skti h likhne ki... wo apse ab pta chl rha hai..
lgta hai mujhe ab Mehnat krni hogi...
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Aapke shabdon mein jo lagan aur junoon hai, woh sach mein prashansaniya hai. Jo aap likhte hain, usmein apne jazbaat ko itni khoobsurati se bayaan karte hain, aur yeh samajhna ki har likhai ke peeche ek alag soch bhi ho sakti hai, yeh ek naya nazariya hai. Aapne jo kaha, "Mehnat karni hogi," yeh sach hai—jab hum apne likhne mein aur apne jazbaat mein mehnat karte hain, toh woh humare shabdon mein aur bhi gehraayi aur taqat laati hai.

"Jo likha jata hai, wo ek safar hai apne jazbaat ka,
Par ek nayi soch bhi uss safar mein rang bhar sakti hai.
Mehnat se jo padhkar samajhna hai, usmein ek nayi duniya chhupi hoti hai,
Har soch, har lafz, apne rang se ek nayi roshni dikhaati hai."

Aapne jo inspiration paayi hai, usse aapka likhne ka safar aur bhi roshan ho. Har likhai mein ek nayi kahani chhupi hoti hai—aur jab aap apne andar ki khoj karte hain, tab woh likhai aur bhi gehraayi se samajh aati hai.
 
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