My Upcoming New Item Song Lyrics. Please Tell Me Any Changes Needed If I Need To Record Vocals For My Song Now

[Scorpioboy69]

Here 'M' Stand For Male Vocals Or Lines
Here 'F' Stand For Female Vocals Or Linsz

M- Teri Aakhein Aahaa Kissssaaaa
M- Teri Zulfein Aahaa Kissssaaaa
M- Teri Khushboo Aahaa Kissssaaaa

M - Tere Husn Ka Jaadu Tu Aise Kar Gayi ,
Aah Haa Kaise Kar Gayi?
F - Mere Husn Ke Jaadu Pe Tu Kyun Fidaa Hai Re?

(Interlude)

M- Aakhon Sey Aakhein Lagi
F- Aakhonmein Mein Hu Bassi
M- Aakhon Ko Yeh Kaisa Dhoka Huya

F- Meri Khubsurti Aisi,
M- Usspe Mein Hu Fidaa,
M - Aakhein Aur Khubsurti Dono Pe Mein Fisal Gaya

F- Rukh Rukh Jaa Zara Dil Sey Dil Milne Doh, Dil Mein Kitni Jagah Bacchi Hai Dekho .........
M- Heyyy, Dil Mein Toh Jagah Nhi Mil Rhi, Chal Ja Ja Ja Ja Re Tujhse Ishq Mein Kyun Ladao ? Oye............

M- Teri Baatein Aahaa Kissssaaa
M- Teri Awaaz Aahaa Kisssaaa
M- Arey Tere Zulfein Aahaa Kissssaaa

F- Tere Baatein Aahaa Kisssaaa
F- Tera Awaaz Aahaa Kissssaaa
F- Tera Chehra Aahaa Kissssaaa

(Ending Part)
M- Teri Aakhein Aahaa Kisssaaa
F- Chup, Tere Kapde Aahaa Kissaaa
M- Teri Baatein Aahaa Kisssaa
F- Tere Sharaartein Aahaa Kisssaa
M- Teri Khushboo Aahaa Kissaaa
F- Hmm Ah Ha Ha Aahaa Kissaa

 

[Scorpioboy69]

Please like and comment everyone

 

[RJJHANVII]

Any way all the best man. Donno hindi to tell changes

 

[Scorpioboy69]

Any way all the best man. Donno hindi to tell changes

Alright you don't know Hindi by the way where are you from?

 

[RJJHANVII]

Alright you don't know Hindi by the way where are you from?

Japan

 

[Scorpioboy69]

Japan

Oh I am from 1003 BC

 

[HornyBanana]

Here 'M' Stand For Male Vocals Or Lines
Here 'F' Stand For Female Vocals Or Linsz

M- Teri Aakhein Aahaa Kissssaaaa
M- Teri Zulfein Aahaa Kissssaaaa
M- Teri Khushboo Aahaa Kissssaaaa

M - Tere Husn Ka Jaadu Tu Aise Kar Gayi ,
Aah Haa Kaise Kar Gayi?
F - Mere Husn Ke Jaadu Pe Tu Kyun Fidaa Hai Re?

(Interlude)

M- Aakhon Sey Aakhein Lagi
F- Aakhonmein Mein Hu Bassi
M- Aakhon Ko Yeh Kaisa Dhoka Huya

F- Meri Khubsurti Aisi,
M- Usspe Mein Hu Fidaa,
M - Aakhein Aur Khubsurti Dono Pe Mein Fisal Gaya

F- Rukh Rukh Jaa Zara Dil Sey Dil Milne Doh, Dil Mein Kitni Jagah Bacchi Hai Dekho .........
M- Heyyy, Dil Mein Toh Jagah Nhi Mil Rhi, Chal Ja Ja Ja Ja Re Tujhse Ishq Mein Kyun Ladao ? Oye............

M- Teri Baatein Aahaa Kissssaaa
M- Teri Awaaz Aahaa Kisssaaa
M- Arey Tere Zulfein Aahaa Kissssaaa

F- Tere Baatein Aahaa Kisssaaa
F- Tera Awaaz Aahaa Kissssaaa
F- Tera Chehra Aahaa Kissssaaa

(Ending Part)
M- Teri Aakhein Aahaa Kisssaaa
F- Chup, Tere Kapde Aahaa Kissaaa
M- Teri Baatein Aahaa Kisssaa
F- Tere Sharaartein Aahaa Kisssaa
M- Teri Khushboo Aahaa Kissaaa
F- Hmm Ah Ha Ha Aahaa Kissaa

I only see repetition of "Kiss" word.

 

[Scorpioboy69]

I only see repetition of "Kiss" word.

Actually that is not a kiss lol but I wrote lyrics according to my music how I am gonna sing in my track so that's why I uploaded that direct lyrics only but does it sound better?

 

[4ץöu]

 

[Scorpioboy69]

Thanks