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Mohabbat ka Ahsas..!!!

Anchal23 said:
Ajib jan rehte hai iss jahan
Khud ka nfaa dekh dusro ka kare nuksaan...
Hum buddhu sankochte 4log kya kahenge
Dil tbhi puchta hai to fir khush kab rahenge...
4log sahara dene kyaa aayenge..?
Unke bare mai na socha to aaram se jee paaynge??
Man ki aawajein dab gayi, Dil ke sapne toot gaye
Khud se pehle 4log ke baarein mai sochne mai saare hnsee pal mit gaye...
Ab agar inn 4logo ke bare mai sochungi
To jinda chlti laash ho jaaungi
Haunsla hain mujhme tabhi to aage uddungi...
Sapno ki raah mai khud chalungi to aksar kaante to chubhenge
Itna to guroor hoga ki ye 4log ab kuch nahi kahenge...
Raat mai sukoon se so sakungi
Tab beetar man mai sawaal kar sakungi...
Abtk kyu inn 4logo ka tune socha tha..
Kyu apne sapno ko adhoora tune chhoda thaa...
Par "Anchu" jeevan chakar yahin hai...!!!
Ant mai yahin 4log aayenge.
Tujhe kandhe par uthaa, chand lakdiyon pr foonk aayenge..!!!
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Wah, Anchu! Yeh toh sirf ek kavita nahi, ek zindagi ka sach hai jo har kisi ne mehsoos kiya hoga. Tumne "4 log kya kahenge" wali soch ko ek dum khulkar likha hai—ek aisi sachchai jo hum sab jaante hain, par maante nahi.

Tumhari lines—"Khud ka nfaa dekh dusro ka kare nuksaan..."—ek dum gehri baat keh gayi. Yeh duniya aise hi chalti hai, par jo log is daud se alag ho jaate hain, wo hi sacchi khushi paate hain. Aur jo ending tumne likhi—"Ant mai yahin 4 log aayenge, tujhe kandhe par uthaa, chand lakdiyon pr foonk aayenge..."—yeh toh ekdum powerful aur reality check jaisi hai!

Yeh kavita sirf ek rebellion nahi, ek awakening hai. Tumne jitni sincerity aur dard ke saath likha hai, woh mehsoos ho raha hai. Kya yeh likhte waqt koi personal ehsaas ya experience chal raha tha dimaag mein? Ya bas ek soch thi jo shabdon mein dhal gayi?
 
Lion_Hearted said:
Wah, Anchu! Yeh toh sirf ek kavita nahi, ek zindagi ka sach hai jo har kisi ne mehsoos kiya hoga. Tumne "4 log kya kahenge" wali soch ko ek dum khulkar likha hai—ek aisi sachchai jo hum sab jaante hain, par maante nahi.

Tumhari lines—"Khud ka nfaa dekh dusro ka kare nuksaan..."—ek dum gehri baat keh gayi. Yeh duniya aise hi chalti hai, par jo log is daud se alag ho jaate hain, wo hi sacchi khushi paate hain. Aur jo ending tumne likhi—"Ant mai yahin 4 log aayenge, tujhe kandhe par uthaa, chand lakdiyon pr foonk aayenge..."—yeh toh ekdum powerful aur reality check jaisi hai!

Yeh kavita sirf ek rebellion nahi, ek awakening hai. Tumne jitni sincerity aur dard ke saath likha hai, woh mehsoos ho raha hai. Kya yeh likhte waqt koi personal ehsaas ya experience chal raha tha dimaag mein? Ya bas ek soch thi jo shabdon mein dhal gayi?
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Ye real experience hi hai mera
kaafi dil k kreeb..!!!
 
Anchal23 said:
Ye real experience hi hai mera
kaafi dil k kreeb..!!!
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Yeh mehsoos ho raha tha tumhari baaton mein… Jab koi cheez dil ke kareeb ho, toh uska har shabd ek alag gehraai rakhta hai. Tumne jo dukh, jo talaash, jo mohabbat shabdon ke saath jodi hai, wo sirf likhawat nahi, ek zinda ehsaas hai.

Shayad isiliye tum shabdon se itna lagav mehsoos karti ho, kyunki unhone tumhari kahaniyon, tumhare ehsaason ko jiya hai. Yeh sirf alfaaz nahi, yeh tumhara ek hissa hain, jo tumne apne dukh, apni khushi, apne khayalon ke saath sanwara hai.

Jab bhi tum likhti ho, toh kya yeh ek tarah ka sukoon lagta hai? Ek aisi jagah jahan duniya ka shor kam ho jaata hai, aur sirf tum aur tumhari soch bachi rehti hai?
 
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