Eternal Ember

[JasGhost]

Eternal Ember

With one look into your eyes, my heart beats loud,
A symphony of steady rhythms where I belong.
When you're by my side, I shine with quiet light,
A soft glow at night that I bother not to hide.

When in your embrace, my soul feels at home,
A tender calm that can hide storms within.
When our fingers intertwine, it's a fire untamed,
A frosty blue flame that no one can name.

When you're here with me, the world turns alive and true,
A dark sky at night kissed by stars and a silver sphere.
When you whisper my name, Time dissolves in eternity,
Then a timeless dance of love, lingers through the night.
(A song of eternity)

 

[Choudhary_]

Eternal Ember

With one look into your eyes, my heart beats loud,
A symphony of steady rhythms where I belong.
When you're by my side, I shine with quiet light,
A soft glow at night that I bother not to hide.

When in your embrace, my soul feels at home,
A tender calm that can hide storms within.
When our fingers intertwine, it's a fire untamed,
A frosty blue flame that no one can name.

When you're here with me, the world turns alive and true,
A dark sky at night kissed by stars and a silver sphere.
When you whisper my name, Time dissolves in eternity,
A timeless dance of love that lingers through the night.
(A song of eternity)

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Very well written jassu it's sweet cool and worthy

 

[Anshhi]

Eternal Ember

With one look into your eyes, my heart beats loud,
A symphony of steady rhythms where I belong.
When you're by my side, I shine with quiet light,
A soft glow at night that I bother not to hide.

When in your embrace, my soul feels at home,
A tender calm that can hide storms within.
When our fingers intertwine, it's a fire untamed,
A frosty blue flame that no one can name.

When you're here with me, the world turns alive and true,
A dark sky at night kissed by stars and a silver sphere.
When you whisper my name, Time dissolves in eternity,
A timeless dance of love that lingers through the night.
(A song of eternity)

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You're irresistible when you blush.*A_AICS

 

[EkaLustYa]

When you whisper my name

I tried to whisper your name but I couldn’t think of any - other than -Dormy and Candie- lol is that you?

 

[URum]

Nice

 

[ℇlαᖇα]

Eternal Ember

With one look into your eyes, my heart beats loud,
A symphony of steady rhythms where I belong.
When you're by my side, I shine with quiet light,
A soft glow at night that I bother not to hide.

When in your embrace, my soul feels at home,
A tender calm that can hide storms within.
When our fingers intertwine, it's a fire untamed,
A frosty blue flame that no one can name.

When you're here with me, the world turns alive and true,
A dark sky at night kissed by stars and a silver sphere.
When you whisper my name, Time dissolves in eternity,
Then a timeless dance of love, lingers through the night.
(A song of eternity)

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Nicely penned babe, keep going

 

[criss cross]

Eternal Ember

With one look into your eyes, my heart beats loud,
A symphony of steady rhythms where I belong.
When you're by my side, I shine with quiet light,
A soft glow at night that I bother not to hide.

When in your embrace, my soul feels at home,
A tender calm that can hide storms within.
When our fingers intertwine, it's a fire untamed,
A frosty blue flame that no one can name.

When you're here with me, the world turns alive and true,
A dark sky at night kissed by stars and a silver sphere.
When you whisper my name, Time dissolves in eternity,
Then a timeless dance of love, lingers through the night.
(A song of eternity)

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"This is beautifully written! The imagery and emotions flow effortlessly, capturing a timeless connection. Truly, love like this feels eternal, like an ember that never fades. Amazing work!"

 

[Dom55]

 

[Rockzz ✨श्वेतराग✨]

Eternal Ember

With one look into your eyes, my heart beats loud,
A symphony of steady rhythms where I belong.
When you're by my side, I shine with quiet light,
A soft glow at night that I bother not to hide.

When in your embrace, my soul feels at home,
A tender calm that can hide storms within.
When our fingers intertwine, it's a fire untamed,
A frosty blue flame that no one can name.

When you're here with me, the world turns alive and true,
A dark sky at night kissed by stars and a silver sphere.
When you whisper my name, Time dissolves in eternity,
Then a timeless dance of love, lingers through the night.
(A song of eternity)

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Nice...

 

[JasGhost]

Very well written jassu it's sweet cool and worthy

Thank you for seeing the worth in my words.

You're irresistible when you blush.

Awww... Thank you

I tried to whisper your name but I couldn’t think of any - other than -Dormy and Candie- lol is that you?

Hahahhaha Maybe dormy and candie ae fragments of a memory you trying to grasp.. They say name may fade but essence remain.. Who knows if they're me in a way

 

[JasGhost]

Nice

Thank you.

Nicely penned babe, keep going

Thanks ela...

 

[JasGhost]

"This is beautifully written! The imagery and emotions flow effortlessly, capturing a timeless connection. Truly, love like this feels eternal, like an ember that never fades. Amazing work!"

I'm glad you can feel the emotions i was trying to convey through my words thank you.

Nice...

Thank you

 

[criss cross]

I'm glad you can feel the emotions i was trying to convey through my words thank you.

Thank you

Your words carry the kind of love that warms hearts and lingers in the soul. I’m lucky to feel it through every line—thank you for sharing something so beautiful!

 

[JasGhost]

Your words carry the kind of love that warms hearts and lingers in the soul. I’m lucky to feel it through every line—thank you for sharing something so beautiful!

Thank you so much...
Review like this is truly inspiring for an amateur scribbler like me.

 

[Scorpioboy69]

Why can't people talk any else instead of love between couples I am fed up because I didn't got girlfriend so don't ignite the fire there are many more topics like abortion divorce breakups cheating old age homes women's safety especially male safety we should talk and discuss on this our opinions what if a idea we will discuss get famous and reach to government we can bring revolution together

 

[JasGhost]

Why can't people talk any else instead of love between couples I am fed up because I didn't got girlfriend so don't ignite the fire there are many more topics like abortion divorce breakups cheating old age homes women's safety especially male safety we should talk and discuss on this our opinions what if a idea we will discuss get famous and reach to government we can bring revolution together

So what? Be clear what you wanna accomplish with your pov here.

1. You don't have GF am i oblige to find one for u?

2. You want me to stop writing on this specific topic? My dear you know world especially my world isn't moving according to what you want in it unfortunately for you can't stop myself from writing on this.

3.All those topics are good suggestion why don't you take the initiative to write something on them and I'll cheer up for you. Maybe add up to it but definitely not the way you did.

4. Nops i don't want fame nor wanna make a revolution with YOU. If i have to accomplish something will do it alone or with different like minded people.

(hope this provide an ice pack and clear all your queries. If you have something else to say my private are open to welcome them but definitely not my thread to create a drama please cz I'm so done with it.)

 

[Scorpioboy69]

So what? Be clear what you wanna accomplish with your pov here.

1. You don't have GF am i oblige to find one for u?

2. You want me to stop writing on this specific topic? My dear you know world especially my world isn't moving according to what you want in it unfortunately for you can't stop myself from writing on this.

3.All those topics are good suggestion why don't you take the initiative to write something on them and I'll cheer up for you. Maybe add up to it but definitely not the way you did.

4. Nops i don't want fame nor wanna make a revolution with YOU. If i have to accomplish something will do it alone or with different like minded people.

(hope this provide an ice pack and clear all your queries. If you have something else to say my private are open to welcome them but definitely not my thread to create a drama.)

I didn't told you that it's bad but the topic of love of.couples is quite common and the people get in expectation it's not the case with you specially it's for all and you are not understanding a vision and you only don't support other male to do something like you said I will accomplish something alone or with different like minded people brother it's not an argument but letting you know that peace and working together by putting creativity is a great thing well it seems you are new here that you took my message in a wrong way already grow up that's it and posting about love of couples is not wrong it's so so good but it's an common illusion and why you will find. A girl for me did I asked or told you buddy think before speaking something what we do or say we can get that in return...... Om Shanayishraya Namah ! Always choose peace than violence because the most matters get settle down and spread love and i think you don't deserve to post about love the way you speak is so rude and harsh and see the way I am speaking is so peaceful and never tell anyone what to do like why should I message you in private...... Thanks take care buddy

 

[JasGhost]

I didn't told you that it's bad but the topic of love of.couples is quite common and the people get in expectation it's not the case with you specially it's for all and you are not understanding a vision and you only don't support other male to do something like you said I will accomplish something alone or with different like minded people brother it's not an argument but letting you know that peace and working together by putting creativity is a great thing well it seems you are new here that you took my message in a wrong way already grow up that's it and posting about love of couples is not wrong it's so so good but it's an common illusion and why you will find. A girl for me did I asked or told you buddy think before speaking something what we do or say we can get that in return...... Om Shanayishraya Namah ! Always choose peace than violence because the most matters get settle down and spread love and i think you don't deserve to post about love the way you speak is so rude and harsh and see the way I am speaking is so peaceful and never tell anyone what to do like why should I message you in private...... Thanks take care buddy

Sigh No comments
Keep it up...

 

[Scorpioboy69]

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The thing yesterday happened was my mistake and I was in argument with my siblings in frustration happened and i apologized also yesterday they punished me by keep me mute on forum for more than one day now there is no my mistakes not a bad word and I talked about some good things might be little bit rudely i wrote in frustration but the jasghost wrote this much big message to me like i gaved him bad words and i didn't even said wrong in this post yesterday that post I agree my mistake not this one he is just a vip member and a good friend you are taking his side i understand but whats wrong did I said to stop spreading posts about love never I just with posts of love we can discuss more thing please ma'am you need to see both the sides for justice

 

[criss cross]

Thank you so much...
Review like this is truly inspiring for an amateur scribbler like me.

Your writing is like a delicate flame, quietly glowing but capable of igniting so much warmth and light. Don’t underestimate the power of your words, have the potential to touch hearts, inspire minds, and change perspectives. Every piece you write, no matter how small or imperfect it seems