Eternal Ember

[JasGhost]

Eternal Ember

With one look into your eyes, my heart beats loud,
A symphony of steady rhythms where I belong.
When you're by my side, I shine with quiet light,
A soft glow at night that I bother not to hide.

When in your embrace, my soul feels at home,
A tender calm that can hide storms within.
When our fingers intertwine, it's a fire untamed,
A frosty blue flame that no one can name.

When you're here with me, the world turns alive and true,
A dark sky at night kissed by stars and a silver sphere.
When you whisper my name, Time dissolves in eternity,
Then a timeless dance of love, lingers through the night.
(A song of eternity)

 

[Choudhary_]

Eternal Ember

With one look into your eyes, my heart beats loud,
A symphony of steady rhythms where I belong.
When you're by my side, I shine with quiet light,
A soft glow at night that I bother not to hide.

When in your embrace, my soul feels at home,
A tender calm that can hide storms within.
When our fingers intertwine, it's a fire untamed,
A frosty blue flame that no one can name.

When you're here with me, the world turns alive and true,
A dark sky at night kissed by stars and a silver sphere.
When you whisper my name, Time dissolves in eternity,
A timeless dance of love that lingers through the night.
(A song of eternity)

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Very well written jassu it's sweet cool and worthy

 

[Anshhi]

Eternal Ember

With one look into your eyes, my heart beats loud,
A symphony of steady rhythms where I belong.
When you're by my side, I shine with quiet light,
A soft glow at night that I bother not to hide.

When in your embrace, my soul feels at home,
A tender calm that can hide storms within.
When our fingers intertwine, it's a fire untamed,
A frosty blue flame that no one can name.

When you're here with me, the world turns alive and true,
A dark sky at night kissed by stars and a silver sphere.
When you whisper my name, Time dissolves in eternity,
A timeless dance of love that lingers through the night.
(A song of eternity)

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You're irresistible when you blush.*A_AICS

 

[EkaLustYa]

When you whisper my name

I tried to whisper your name but I couldn’t think of any - other than -Dormy and Candie- lol is that you?

 

[URum]

Nice

 

[ℇlαᖇα]

Eternal Ember

With one look into your eyes, my heart beats loud,
A symphony of steady rhythms where I belong.
When you're by my side, I shine with quiet light,
A soft glow at night that I bother not to hide.

When in your embrace, my soul feels at home,
A tender calm that can hide storms within.
When our fingers intertwine, it's a fire untamed,
A frosty blue flame that no one can name.

When you're here with me, the world turns alive and true,
A dark sky at night kissed by stars and a silver sphere.
When you whisper my name, Time dissolves in eternity,
Then a timeless dance of love, lingers through the night.
(A song of eternity)

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Nicely penned babe, keep going

 

[criss cross]

Eternal Ember

With one look into your eyes, my heart beats loud,
A symphony of steady rhythms where I belong.
When you're by my side, I shine with quiet light,
A soft glow at night that I bother not to hide.

When in your embrace, my soul feels at home,
A tender calm that can hide storms within.
When our fingers intertwine, it's a fire untamed,
A frosty blue flame that no one can name.

When you're here with me, the world turns alive and true,
A dark sky at night kissed by stars and a silver sphere.
When you whisper my name, Time dissolves in eternity,
Then a timeless dance of love, lingers through the night.
(A song of eternity)

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"This is beautifully written! The imagery and emotions flow effortlessly, capturing a timeless connection. Truly, love like this feels eternal, like an ember that never fades. Amazing work!"

 

[Dom55]