Beneath the Silence 5 : A Return

[Solara]

How many parts more madam? What a writer you are !!! Not just the way you arrange the parts with links to previous parts and the next parts - made it an easy flow to read - just like the conversation you are building up with slow tempo with two characters!

The introduction of characters, the description of the ambience, the thought process in each other’s mind - you are just nailing it !!

It’s truly a pleasure to read your narrative style and the posts.

Hahaha !! Thankies !

Yeah I link the parts to the prev and next coz each time I post a new one... I like to read from the first one again... To settle that flow in my mind and then fill the draft of the next chapter accordingly

Before you post the next part, tell me how many parts more lol.

Ummmm... The way it's in my mind rn .. another 3-5 maybe....?

 

[Solara]

Pleasure reading this... You have a way to captivate the audience.
The end where you say n i quote
" the silence between them soft and unspoken, a tentative step toward something neither could fully define but both quietly hoped for."
Was something that touched me on oh so many levels... A fleeing glance into my own long lost life

Thank u Mamuu *hugs*

If it's relatable, it's real. and am glad...

Long .... Lost life ? I don't want to trigger bad memories...

 

[URum]

Thank u Mamuu *hugs*

If it's relatable, it's real. and am glad...

Long .... Lost life ? I don't want to trigger bad memories...

Nah mamu happy moments of me n my late wife sharing the wonderful language of silence.

Silent yet a convo btw our hearts

 

[Solara]

Nah mamu happy moments of me n my late wife sharing the wonderful language of silence.

Silent yet a convo btw our hearts

Lots of love n hugs for u

 

[Solara]

Okies... Posting the next chapter now !

 

[Solara]

Heres the link to the next

Beneath the Silence 6 : A Spark of Courage

Continued from Beneath the Silence 5 : A Return (click to read) Hannah sipped her coffee, her fingers tracing the edge of the cup. “So, do you always come here this early?” Ethan nodded, a faint smile tugging at his lips. “Most days. It’s my way of easing into the chaos.” “Yeah, I get...

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[Ashnaa]

Smooth Ethan, all the correct answers