A fleeting glow

[ThampraN]

I saw something bright far away,
like a ball of light that shines and fades
with the passage of time. Darkness surrounds it,
yet the fleeting glow dances on the edge of night.

It flickers like a heartbeat, a hopeful reminder
that even in the depths of despair, there is still hope—
a flicker of possibility guiding lost souls
through the labyrinth of uncertainty.

I feel compelled to share this with you,
to convey the warmth of that distant light,
in hopes of bringing you a sense of profound happiness,
both within and without.

Even when the weight of the world feels unbearable,
remember that the smallest sparks can illuminate
the darkest paths. This glow presents itself
to each of us in times of darkness;

let it touch your soul, allow it to work its magic,
and cast your own light onto the world,
extinguishing the shadows that surround us.
YOU vs YOU

 

[marcello]

I saw something bright far away,
like a ball of light that shines and fades
with the passage of time. Darkness surrounds it,
yet the fleeting glow dances on the edge of night.

It flickers like a heartbeat, a hopeful reminder
that even in the depths of despair, there is still hope—
a flicker of possibility guiding lost souls
through the labyrinth of uncertainty.

I feel compelled to share this with you,
to convey the warmth of that distant light,
in hopes of bringing you a sense of profound happiness,
both within and without.

Even when the weight of the world feels unbearable,
remember that the smallest sparks can illuminate
the darkest paths. This glow presents itself
to each of us in times of darkness;

let it touch your soul, allow it to work its magic,
and cast your own light onto the world,
extinguishing the shadows that surround us.
YOU vs YOU

 

[URum]

I saw something bright far away,
like a ball of light that shines and fades
with the passage of time. Darkness surrounds it,
yet the fleeting glow dances on the edge of night.

It flickers like a heartbeat, a hopeful reminder
that even in the depths of despair, there is still hope—
a flicker of possibility guiding lost souls
through the labyrinth of uncertainty.

I feel compelled to share this with you,
to convey the warmth of that distant light,
in hopes of bringing you a sense of profound happiness,
both within and without.

Even when the weight of the world feels unbearable,
remember that the smallest sparks can illuminate
the darkest paths. This glow presents itself
to each of us in times of darkness;

let it touch your soul, allow it to work its magic,
and cast your own light onto the world,
extinguishing the shadows that surround us.
YOU vs YOU

Honestly as I read this I could only be amazed at how similar it is to the poem Daffodils.. Beautiful

 

[lolahrudhyn]

I saw something bright far away,
like a ball of light that shines and fades
with the passage of time. Darkness surrounds it,
yet the fleeting glow dances on the edge of night.

It flickers like a heartbeat, a hopeful reminder
that even in the depths of despair, there is still hope—
a flicker of possibility guiding lost souls
through the labyrinth of uncertainty.

I feel compelled to share this with you,
to convey the warmth of that distant light,
in hopes of bringing you a sense of profound happiness,
both within and without.

Even when the weight of the world feels unbearable,
remember that the smallest sparks can illuminate
the darkest paths. This glow presents itself
to each of us in times of darkness;

let it touch your soul, allow it to work its magic,
and cast your own light onto the world,
extinguishing the shadows that surround us.
YOU vs YOU

 

[SHEEL]

It’s the sun that rises within, even when the skies above remain gray

 

[Rockzz ✨श्वेतराग✨]

I saw something bright far away,
like a ball of light that shines and fades
with the passage of time. Darkness surrounds it,
yet the fleeting glow dances on the edge of night.

It flickers like a heartbeat, a hopeful reminder
that even in the depths of despair, there is still hope—
a flicker of possibility guiding lost souls
through the labyrinth of uncertainty.

I feel compelled to share this with you,
to convey the warmth of that distant light,
in hopes of bringing you a sense of profound happiness,
both within and without.

Even when the weight of the world feels unbearable,
remember that the smallest sparks can illuminate
the darkest paths. This glow presents itself
to each of us in times of darkness;

let it touch your soul, allow it to work its magic,
and cast your own light onto the world,
extinguishing the shadows that surround us.
YOU vs YOU

Nice...

 

[ThampraN]

 

[ThampraN]

Honestly as I read this I could only be amazed at how similar it is to the poem Daffodils.. Beautiful

That's a great compliment.. ty

 

[ThampraN]

Heee

 

[ThampraN]

It’s the sun that rises within, even when the skies above remain gray

and the light shines through us, cleansing us deep within.

 

[ThampraN]

Nice...

Tyyy

 

[Anshhi]

I saw something bright far away,
like a ball of light that shines and fades
with the passage of time. Darkness surrounds it,
yet the fleeting glow dances on the edge of night.

It flickers like a heartbeat, a hopeful reminder
that even in the depths of despair, there is still hope—
a flicker of possibility guiding lost souls
through the labyrinth of uncertainty.

I feel compelled to share this with you,
to convey the warmth of that distant light,
in hopes of bringing you a sense of profound happiness,
both within and without.

Even when the weight of the world feels unbearable,
remember that the smallest sparks can illuminate
the darkest paths. This glow presents itself
to each of us in times of darkness;

let it touch your soul, allow it to work its magic,
and cast your own light onto the world,
extinguishing the shadows that surround us.
YOU vs YOU

 

[zanaa]

I saw something bright far away,
like a ball of light that shines and fades
with the passage of time. Darkness surrounds it,
yet the fleeting glow dances on the edge of night.

It flickers like a heartbeat, a hopeful reminder
that even in the depths of despair, there is still hope—
a flicker of possibility guiding lost souls
through the labyrinth of uncertainty.

I feel compelled to share this with you,
to convey the warmth of that distant light,
in hopes of bringing you a sense of profound happiness,
both within and without.

Even when the weight of the world feels unbearable,
remember that the smallest sparks can illuminate
the darkest paths. This glow presents itself
to each of us in times of darkness;

let it touch your soul, allow it to work its magic,
and cast your own light onto the world,
extinguishing the shadows that surround us.
YOU vs YOU

Nice

 

[ThampraN]

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Thanks

 

[ThampraN]

Nice

Thanks da

 

[ആരാധിക (Aaradhika)]

I saw something bright far away,
like a ball of light that shines and fades
with the passage of time. Darkness surrounds it,
yet the fleeting glow dances on the edge of night.

It flickers like a heartbeat, a hopeful reminder
that even in the depths of despair, there is still hope—
a flicker of possibility guiding lost souls
through the labyrinth of uncertainty.

I feel compelled to share this with you,
to convey the warmth of that distant light,
in hopes of bringing you a sense of profound happiness,
both within and without.

Even when the weight of the world feels unbearable,
remember that the smallest sparks can illuminate
the darkest paths. This glow presents itself
to each of us in times of darkness;

let it touch your soul, allow it to work its magic,
and cast your own light onto the world,
extinguishing the shadows that surround us.
YOU vs YOU

Nice...
You are absolutely right, everything in life is fleeting. You, me, everyone we’ve met, everything we experience will eventually pass.
perhaps that's the beauty of life...
Keep Writitng....

 

[ThampraN]

Nice...
You are absolutely right, everything in life is fleeting. You, me, everyone we’ve met, everything we experience will eventually pass.
perhaps that's the beauty of life...
Keep Writitng....

Thanks for your kind words
Until the day we too shall pass, we can cherish our most memorable moments; and the impact we have on others can endure, echoing through the lives we touch.

 

[shivagni]

I saw something bright far away,
like a ball of light that shines and fades
with the passage of time. Darkness surrounds it,
yet the fleeting glow dances on the edge of night.

It flickers like a heartbeat, a hopeful reminder
that even in the depths of despair, there is still hope—
a flicker of possibility guiding lost souls
through the labyrinth of uncertainty.

I feel compelled to share this with you,
to convey the warmth of that distant light,
in hopes of bringing you a sense of profound happiness,
both within and without.

Even when the weight of the world feels unbearable,
remember that the smallest sparks can illuminate
the darkest paths. This glow presents itself
to each of us in times of darkness;

let it touch your soul, allow it to work its magic,
and cast your own light onto the world,
extinguishing the shadows that surround us.
YOU vs YOU

Beautifully penned down those emotions.....

 

[ThampraN]

Beautifully penned down those emotions.....

Thanks for your kind words...