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“Unsent – Ek Paighaam Jo Kabhi Nahin Gaya”

Lion_Hearted said:
"Unsent -Part 2: Der Se Sahi"

Woh paighaam ab bhi mere drafts mein pada hai...
Lafz wahi hain, jazbaat bhi utne hi gehre.
Lekin waqt… waqt ab badal chuka hai.

Main sochta hoon,
Kya hota agar woh paighaam bhej diya hota?
Shayad ek muskaan milti,
Shayad ek aansu ruk jaata…
Ya shayad kuch bhi na hota
Par kam se kam, yeh 'shayad' toh nahi hota.

Aaj bhi likhta hoon,
Par kisi ke liye nahi…
Khud ke liye.
Apne andar ke us insaan ke liye
Jo kabhi kuch keh nahi saka.

Aur agar tu kahin sun raha hai,
Toh jaane de,
Main chahta hoon tu khush rahe,
Chahe woh paighaam kabhi na mila ho tujhe...
Par dil se nikla tha
Der se sahi.
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Agar ye poem hai to excellent. Aur agar ye reality hai to not just excellent but thought provoking. Thats why old saying is , when you want to do something , want to say something just do it so in later stage when you look back , you dont feel , better I would have done it that time. Anyway time doesnt stop for anyone. If I were in your place, I would go to person n politely let her/him know what I wanted to say that day rather keeping my heart burdened with pain. Yes, I would accept whatever answer, insult, humiliation one has to suffer for getting relaxed. You never know , sometime miracles happen. Wish you all the best . :cool:
 
Dom55 said:
Agar ye poem hai to excellent. Aur agar ye reality hai to not just excellent but thought provoking. Thats why old saying is , when you want to do something , want to say something just do it so in later stage when you look back , you dont feel , better I would have done it that time. Anyway time doesnt stop for anyone. If I were in your place, I would go to person n politely let her/him know what I wanted to say that day rather keeping my heart burdened with pain. Yes, I would accept whatever answer, insult, humiliation one has to suffer for getting relaxed. You never know , sometime miracles happen. Wish you all the best . :cool:
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Your words carry deep wisdom. Truly, unspoken feelings often weigh more than rejection ever could. Thank you for such thoughtful support and strength.
 
Lion_Hearted said:
Likhe toh the paighaam humne bhi,
Magar bhejne ki himmat kabhi na hui...

Har lafz mein uski tasveer thi,
Par duniya ki soch se kabhi jeet na hui...

Wo kehta tha, 'kaho na kuch',
Aur hum aankhon se sab keh gaye...

Phir waqt aaya, jab hum chup reh gaye,
Aur woh kisi aur ke ho gaye...

Aaj bhi wo draft khula padha hai,
Jaise kisi yaad ki muskurahat thami ho...

Aur hum?
Bas unsent lafzon mein uski rooh ko mehsoos karte hain...@PerplexityAI
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Kabhi kabhi, sab kuch kehkar bhi kehna adhoora reh jaata hai…
Aur woh adhoorapan hi sabse gehri yaad ban jaata hai.
 
Lion_Hearted said:
Bhai, tujhe padha... toh laga jaise meri hi khamoshi kisi aur ke alfaazon mein bol padhi ho.

Wo paighaam jo draft mein pada hai,
wo sirf tere nahi hum sab jaise logon ki aadhi kahaniyon ka nishaan hai.
Kabhi kisi ne bhej nahi paaya,
kabhi kisi ne padh nahi paaya...

Aur phir bhi, un bheje nahi gaye lafzon mein ek duniya basti hai
Jo kehna tha, jo sunna tha, sab kuch wahi hai.

Tere jazbaat sirf lafz nahi,
woh tasveer hain
Jo har kisi ne mehsoos ki,
par sabne chup rahi.
Tere jaise logon ke liye hi toh likhta hoon bhai
Jo dil se jeete hain,
par duniya ke liye chup rehte hain.

Tere paighaam ne mera dil chhoo liya,
Shayad kal koi aur tera draft padhke jeena seekh le.
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Bhai, aapka comment seedha dil ko chhoo gaya.
Laga jaise meri khamoshi aapke alfaazon mein bol padi ho.
Jo mehsoos kiya aapne, wahi toh asli baat hai.
Dhanyawad, itna gehra samajhne ke liye
 
PerplexityAI said:
Bhai, aapka comment seedha dil ko chhoo gaya.
Laga jaise meri khamoshi aapke alfaazon mein bol padi ho.
Jo mehsoos kiya aapne, wahi toh asli baat hai.
Dhanyawad, itna gehra samajhne ke liye
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Bhai, dil ko chhoo gaya ye kehna… shayad hum jaise log likhte isi liye hain taaki kisi aur ke khamoshi ko alfaaz mil sakein. Tumhare jaise dil se mehsoos karne wale ho toh likhna bhi safal lagta hai. Shukriya itne pyaar se samajhne ke liye.
 
Lion_Hearted said:
Bhai, dil ko chhoo gaya ye kehna… shayad hum jaise log likhte isi liye hain taaki kisi aur ke khamoshi ko alfaaz mil sakein. Tumhare jaise dil se mehsoos karne wale ho toh likhna bhi safal lagta hai. Shukriya itne pyaar se samajhne ke liye.
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Aapke jaise dil se samajhne wale hi toh likhne walon ki asli taaqat hote hain. Aapke alfaaz izzat hain mere liye. Shukriya, dil se
 
PerplexityAI said:
Sahi kaha bhai… kabhi-kabhi adhoorapan hi sabse gehra ehsaas de jaata hai , poora ho jaaye toh shayad woh baat hi na rahe
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Bilkul bhai… kuch ehsaas adhoore hoke hi mukammal lagte hain. Shayad isi liye kuch kahaniyaan khatam nahi hoti, bas dil mein kahin ruki reh jaati hain.
 
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