Touched, Taken and Torn!

[Furiosa]

He twisted strands of my hair around his fingers
I felt whispered kisses slowly dancing around my ears
My pulse in a race with his touch
He rubbed, I swayed.
The faster his movements, the deeper i felt him.
I begged untill he fed my soul with the thickness that grew to ache my body.
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[TheWiTcher08]

Ahem ahem ! Is it what i am thinking or is it just my dirty mind doing the dirty tricks

Jokes apart, its well written

 

[Furiosa]

Ahem ahem ! Is it what i am thinking or is it just my dirty mind doing the dirty tricks

Jokes apart, its well written

Might be a bit of both lol..
Glad you liked it..

 

[Kanna202]

 

[EkaLustYa]

For a rhyme - touched, taken, torn or tamed -would have been better !

But the thickness made me think twice, whether that’s the viscosity or the dia! lol

Good one - glad to see you back in writing!

 

[Dom55]

He twisted strands of my hair around his fingers
I felt whispered kisses slowly dancing around my ears
My pulse in a race with his touch
He rubbed, I swayed.
The faster his movements, the deeper i felt him.
I begged untill he fed my soul with the thickness that grew to ache my body.
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They say well written. I would say well done. Its not that easy to express self experience in own words. Good girl. Keep it up. An dont hesitate to lets know.

 

[Furiosa]

For a rhyme - touched, taken, torn or tamed -would have been better !

Suggestion taken.

But the thickness made me think twice, whether that’s the viscosity or the dia! lol

Its the dia.. Lol

Good one - glad to see you back in writing!

Thank you lustyaa!

 

[Anshhi]

He twisted strands of my hair around his fingers
I felt whispered kisses slowly dancing around my ears
My pulse in a race with his touch
He rubbed, I swayed.
The faster his movements, the deeper i felt him.
I begged untill he fed my soul with the thickness that grew to ache my body.
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The passage is a powerful and evocative depiction of physical intimacy and desire.
*A_AICS

 

[Drofhrts]

He twisted strands of my hair around his fingers
I felt whispered kisses slowly dancing around my ears
My pulse in a race with his touch
He rubbed, I swayed.
The faster his movements, the deeper i felt him.
I begged untill he fed my soul with the thickness that grew to ache my body.
​

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[Ananya1235]

He twisted strands of my hair around his fingers
I felt whispered kisses slowly dancing around my ears
My pulse in a race with his touch
He rubbed, I swayed.
The faster his movements, the deeper i felt him.
I begged untill he fed my soul with the thickness that grew to ache my body.
​

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What's happening here my innocent mind is not able to understand

 

[TheWiTcher08]

Might be a bit of both lol..
Glad you liked it..

How can i not like something which is a mix of both! That raw emotions expressed !
I wouldn't spoil the mood of this literature with just that simple word for the entire phrase ( the act ) though i wanted to