The Shiny Lie of Deceptive Motivators

[JalJala]

They talk of success with a smooth, charming tone,
Selling your dreams while you stand alone.
"Cut off your ties," they coldly insist,
"Only then will your future be blessed"

With slick talk and promises of gold,
They push you away from your loved ones’ hold.
"Isolation’s the key," they deceitfully say,
While they gain from your suffering each day.

In the quiet of your lonely fight,
Their empty promises turn dark as night.
Nightmares and sorrow become your new norm,
As their deceitful schemes start to form.

Their shiny facade hides a cruel game,
Building their empire from your pain and shame.
While they enjoy success built on your tears,
You’re left in the wreckage of all your fears.

 

[Anshhi]

They talk of success with a smooth, charming tone,
Selling your dreams while you stand alone.
"Cut off your ties," they coldly insist,
"Only then will your future be blessed"

With slick talk and promises of gold,
They push you away from your loved ones’ hold.
"Isolation’s the key," they deceitfully say,
While they gain from your suffering each day.

In the quiet of your lonely fight,
Their empty promises turn dark as night.
Nightmares and sorrow become your new norm,
As their deceitful schemes start to form.

Their shiny facade hides a cruel game,
Building their empire from your pain and shame.
While they enjoy success built on your tears,
You’re left in the wreckage of all your fears.

The four lines you say at the end of the poem are the best. This poem is written in beautiful and true language.
*A_AICS

 

[JalJala]

The four lines you say at the end of the poem are the best. This poem is written in beautiful and true language.
*A_AICS

Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you found insight in the poem. I aimed to convey the essence of the message in a way that feels both genuine and impactful. Your feedback means a lot!

Yes, I notice the same concerning trend with so-called motivators and their deceptive quotes that often drive division within society. It seems these figures teach people to prioritize selfishness and aggression. It’s surprising how many follows them, even among educated individuals. I sometimes wonder if people truly recognize that these motivators are, themselves, symbols of the "very selfishness and violence" they promote. I’m just trying to expose how these motivators can ruin people’s lives. Let’s see how it is received.

 

[Winnie]

They talk of success with a smooth, charming tone,
Selling your dreams while you stand alone.
"Cut off your ties," they coldly insist,
"Only then will your future be blessed"

With slick talk and promises of gold,
They push you away from your loved ones’ hold.
"Isolation’s the key," they deceitfully say,
While they gain from your suffering each day.

In the quiet of your lonely fight,
Their empty promises turn dark as night.
Nightmares and sorrow become your new norm,
As their deceitful schemes start to form.

Their shiny facade hides a cruel game,
Building their empire from your pain and shame.
While they enjoy success built on your tears,
You’re left in the wreckage of all your fears.

Woah nice

 

[Anshhi]

Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you found insight in the poem. I aimed to convey the essence of the message in a way that feels both genuine and impactful. Your feedback means a lot!

Yes, I notice the same concerning trend with so-called motivators and their deceptive quotes that often drive division within society. It seems these figures teach people to prioritize selfishness and aggression. It’s surprising how many follows them, even among educated individuals. I sometimes wonder if people truly recognize that these motivators are, themselves, symbols of the "very selfishness and violence" they promote. I’m just trying to expose how these motivators can ruin people’s lives. Let’s see how it is received.

Today you have written an Oscar-winning poem. Through which you have explained many things to people. Now it is the turn of people how to make themselves.
There are many great people who have explained to us the meaning of our life, right and wrong, and we keep away from the right and accept the wrong. I liked that you brought up those things again today. Salute
*A_AICS

 

[JalJala]

Today you have written an Oscar-winning poem. Through this, you have explained many things to people. Now it is the turn of people how to make themselves.
There are many great people who have explained to us the meaning of our life, right and wrong, and we keep away from the right and accept the wrong. I liked that you brought up those things again today. Salute
*A_AICS

Thank you so much for your generous praise! It’s heartening that the poem resonated deeply and touched on important facts. I appreciate your support and acknowledgment.

Kindly don’t salute me, though. I never see people as different from myself. In my eyes, no one is special—neither I nor you. Everyone is equal, and where there is equality, "there is only love, not salutations". Thank you again for your kind words.

 

[criss cross]

They talk of success with a smooth, charming tone,
Selling your dreams while you stand alone.
"Cut off your ties," they coldly insist,
"Only then will your future be blessed"

With slick talk and promises of gold,
They push you away from your loved ones’ hold.
"Isolation’s the key," they deceitfully say,
While they gain from your suffering each day.

In the quiet of your lonely fight,
Their empty promises turn dark as night.
Nightmares and sorrow become your new norm,
As their deceitful schemes start to form.

Their shiny facade hides a cruel game,
Building their empire from your pain and shame.
While they enjoy success built on your tears,
You’re left in the wreckage of all your fears.

Super speechless

 

[JalJala]

Super speechless

Thank you so much, bhai! I'm glad that you enjoyed the poem. Your support means a lot!

 

[Rockzz ✨श्वेतराग✨]

They talk of success with a smooth, charming tone,
Selling your dreams while you stand alone.
"Cut off your ties," they coldly insist,
"Only then will your future be blessed"

With slick talk and promises of gold,
They push you away from your loved ones’ hold.
"Isolation’s the key," they deceitfully say,
While they gain from your suffering each day.

In the quiet of your lonely fight,
Their empty promises turn dark as night.
Nightmares and sorrow become your new norm,
As their deceitful schemes start to form.

Their shiny facade hides a cruel game,
Building their empire from your pain and shame.
While they enjoy success built on your tears,
You’re left in the wreckage of all your fears.

Well said bro

 

[JalJala]

Well said bro

Thank you, my friend