The Death

[Dakshinq]

The day I left your pace,
I left my life, fly to heaven.
There in heaven, I found zero paradise,
Asked the god where the heaven was
the god with extreme tranquility responded,
your paradise was there
your paradise was in him
he was your life and when you broke, so was
broken your life and the heaven once you belonged.

Yes, he was her heaven,
they were the paradise.
They made the world, they made blooms.
Yours Dr.Dear

 

[Jack_v2]

The day I left your pace,
I left my life, fly to heaven.
There in heaven, I found zero paradise,
Asked the god where the heaven was
the god with extreme tranquility responded,
your paradise was there
your paradise was in him
he was your life and when you broke, so was
broken your life and the heaven once you belonged.

Yes, he was her heaven,
they were the paradise.
They made the world, they made blooms.
Yours Dr.Dear

The heaven and hell is here itself its human mind

 

[Dakshinq]

The heaven and hell is here itself its human mind

 

[Anshhi]

The day I left your pace,
I left my life, fly to heaven.
There in heaven, I found zero paradise,
Asked the god where the heaven was
the god with extreme tranquility responded,
your paradise was there
your paradise was in him
he was your life and when you broke, so was
broken your life and the heaven once you belonged.

Yes, he was her heaven,
they were the paradise.
They made the world, they made blooms.
Yours Dr.Dear

Great writing

 

[Dakshinq]

Great writing

thanks anshii

 

[Anshhi]

thanks anshii

Anshhi not anshii

 

[Dakshinq]

Anshhi not anshii

sry lol

 

[Anshhi]

sry lol

 

[Gupthan]

The day I left your pace,
I left my life, fly to heaven.
There in heaven, I found zero paradise,
Asked the god where the heaven was
the god with extreme tranquility responded,
your paradise was there
your paradise was in him
he was your life and when you broke, so was
broken your life and the heaven once you belonged.

Yes, he was her heaven,
they were the paradise.
They made the world, they made blooms.
Yours Dr.Dear

There is no heaven and hell..
Only there is one universe...
And u are my universe

 

[criss cross]

The day I left your pace,
I left my life, fly to heaven.
There in heaven, I found zero paradise,
Asked the god where the heaven was
the god with extreme tranquility responded,
your paradise was there
your paradise was in him
he was your life and when you broke, so was
broken your life and the heaven once you belonged.

Yes, he was her heaven,
they were the paradise.
They made the world, they made blooms.
Yours Dr.Dear

 

[criss cross]

The day I left your pace,
I left my life, fly to heaven.
There in heaven, I found zero paradise,
Asked the god where the heaven was
the god with extreme tranquility responded,
your paradise was there
your paradise was in him
he was your life and when you broke, so was
broken your life and the heaven once you belonged.

Yes, he was her heaven,
they were the paradise.
They made the world, they made blooms.
Yours Dr.Dear

Lovely

 

[Mr Maverick]

The day I left your pace,
I left my life, fly to heaven.
There in heaven, I found zero paradise,
Asked the god where the heaven was
the god with extreme tranquility responded,
your paradise was there
your paradise was in him
he was your life and when you broke, so was
broken your life and the heaven once you belonged.

Yes, he was her heaven,
they were the paradise.
They made the world, they made blooms.
Yours Dr.Dear

But shadows fell, and whispers turned cold,
Their paradise fractured, the story retold.
He stood with regret, she with pain,
Their heaven now marred by an endless rain.
Yet in the shards of broken dreams,
Glimmers of hope, or so it seems.
For love, though fragile, never truly dies,
It waits in the heart, beneath the skies.

 

[Vishnu Prabhaharan]

Your Lines are Mesmerizing

 

[Deepak Kiran]

If I ever have to leave you love,
Please know I didn’t choose it.
You were my every waking thought,
My world, I wouldn’t lose it.

If I ever have to leave you love,
Don’t think I didn’t fight it.
If I had any choice at all,
We would never be divided.

If I ever have to leave you love,
I truly rue the day,
I always thought I’d be with you,
Beside you, come what may.

If I ever have to leave you love,
Please know I’m always there.
That somehow I will find a way,
To show you how I care.

If I ever have to leave you love,
The one thing you must know,
Is that you meant the world to me,
I didn’t want to go.

If I ever have to leave you love,
You’ll always have my heart.
Never fear, my love is here,
Even when apart.

If I ever have to leave you love,
Try to hear my laughter.
And see my smile once in a while,
Let it live with you hereafter.

 

[Deepak Kiran]

The day I left your pace,
I left my life, fly to heaven.
There in heaven, I found zero paradise,
Asked the god where the heaven was
the god with extreme tranquility responded,
your paradise was there
your paradise was in him
he was your life and when you broke, so was
broken your life and the heaven once you belonged.

Yes, he was her heaven,
they were the paradise.
They made the world, they made blooms.
Yours Dr.Dear

Nice one Dakshina @Dakshinq

 

[Dakshinq]

Nice one Dakshina @Dakshinq

 

[Dakshinq]

If I ever have to leave you love,
Please know I didn’t choose it.
You were my every waking thought,
My world, I wouldn’t lose it.

If I ever have to leave you love,
Don’t think I didn’t fight it.
If I had any choice at all,
We would never be divided.

If I ever have to leave you love,
I truly rue the day,
I always thought I’d be with you,
Beside you, come what may.

If I ever have to leave you love,
Please know I’m always there.
That somehow I will find a way,
To show you how I care.

If I ever have to leave you love,
The one thing you must know,
Is that you meant the world to me,
I didn’t want to go.

If I ever have to leave you love,
You’ll always have my heart.
Never fear, my love is here,
Even when apart.

If I ever have to leave you love,
Try to hear my laughter.
And see my smile once in a while,
Let it live with you hereafter.

 

[Dakshinq]

But shadows fell, and whispers turned cold,
Their paradise fractured, the story retold.
He stood with regret, she with pain,
Their heaven now marred by an endless rain.
Yet in the shards of broken dreams,
Glimmers of hope, or so it seems.
For love, though fragile, never truly dies,
It waits in the heart, beneath the skies.

oops! the lines are fantastic

 

[Dakshinq]

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[Lion_Hearted]

The day I left your pace,
I left my life, fly to heaven.
There in heaven, I found zero paradise,
Asked the god where the heaven was
the god with extreme tranquility responded,
your paradise was there
your paradise was in him
he was your life and when you broke, so was
broken your life and the heaven once you belonged.

Yes, he was her heaven,
they were the paradise.
They made the world, they made blooms.
Yours Dr.Dear

Your mentality it's so strong