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Oh ! The relief!!

Elektra

Elektra

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He held her hands as if a little pressure is gonna break her .His own hands trembled as he caress her soft hand a little , feeling her presence,her skin proving him again and again that she's there with him.

His breath hitched as he brought her hands up to his forehead and closed his eyes,his tears finally spilling over.They slid down his cheeks, silent and unrelenting ,as if al the fear, worry and anguish of the past had found the escape.

His heart was sending all thankyou prayers to every god out there who heard him,who didn't let his faith flutter,who saved him by saving her.

He entwined their hands and kissed her knuckles again and again to earn a slurry giggle form her which felt like some one pour ice water on his Burning head .


~oh the relief
 
Elektra said:
He held her hands as if a little pressure is gonna break her .His own hands trembled as he caress her soft hand a little , feeling her presence,her skin proving him again and again that she's there with him.

His breath hitched as he brought her hands up to his forehead and closed his eyes,his tears finally spilling over.They slid down his cheeks, silent and unrelenting ,as if al the fear, worry and anguish of the past had found the escape.

His heart was sending all thankyou prayers to every god out there who heard him,who didn't let his faith flutter,who saved him by saving her.

He entwined their hands and kissed her knuckles again and again to earn a slurry giggle form her which felt like some one pour ice water on his Burning head .


~oh the relief
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ya u can find such guy only in books like they r already a history
 
Elektra said:
He held her hands as if a little pressure is gonna break her .His own hands trembled as he caress her soft hand a little , feeling her presence,her skin proving him again and again that she's there with him.

His breath hitched as he brought her hands up to his forehead and closed his eyes,his tears finally spilling over.They slid down his cheeks, silent and unrelenting ,as if al the fear, worry and anguish of the past had found the escape.

His heart was sending all thankyou prayers to every god out there who heard him,who didn't let his faith flutter,who saved him by saving her.

He entwined their hands and kissed her knuckles again and again to earn a slurry giggle form her which felt like some one pour ice water on his Burning head .


~oh the relief
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This passage is a beautiful and emotional depiction of a tender moment between two people. The language is rich and evocative, conveying the intensity of the emotions felt by the character.

The description of the physical touch between the two, the holding of hands, the caressing, and the kissing of knuckles, creates a sense of intimacy and vulnerability.

The character's emotional state is vividly portrayed, from the trembling hands to the tears spilling over, conveying a sense of relief, gratitude, and joy.

The use of metaphors, such as "his tears finally spilling over" and "his heart was sending all thank you prayers," adds depth and complexity to the emotions expressed.

The passage also suggests a deeper story, hinting at a past ordeal or struggle that the couple has faced, and the relief and gratitude that comes with overcoming it.

Overall, this is a beautifully written passage that effectively conveys the intensity of human emotions and the power of physical touch to express love and gratitude.
*A_AICS
 
Elektra said:
He held her hands as if a little pressure is gonna break her .His own hands trembled as he caress her soft hand a little , feeling her presence,her skin proving him again and again that she's there with him.

His breath hitched as he brought her hands up to his forehead and closed his eyes,his tears finally spilling over.They slid down his cheeks, silent and unrelenting ,as if al the fear, worry and anguish of the past had found the escape.

His heart was sending all thankyou prayers to every god out there who heard him,who didn't let his faith flutter,who saved him by saving her.

He entwined their hands and kissed her knuckles again and again to earn a slurry giggle form her which felt like some one pour ice water on his Burning head .


~oh the relief
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:blessing: beautifully narrated
 
Elektra said:
He held her hands as if a little pressure is gonna break her .His own hands trembled as he caress her soft hand a little , feeling her presence,her skin proving him again and again that she's there with him.

His breath hitched as he brought her hands up to his forehead and closed his eyes,his tears finally spilling over.They slid down his cheeks, silent and unrelenting ,as if al the fear, worry and anguish of the past had found the escape.

His heart was sending all thankyou prayers to every god out there who heard him,who didn't let his faith flutter,who saved him by saving her.

He entwined their hands and kissed her knuckles again and again to earn a slurry giggle form her which felt like some one pour ice water on his Burning head .


~oh the relief
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"Oh the Relief"
Your words pulse with raw emotion, weaving a moment so tender and powerful that it lingers like a whispered prayer.
Keep going Kissuluu ..​
 
Anshhi said:
This passage is a beautiful and emotional depiction of a tender moment between two people. The language is rich and evocative, conveying the intensity of the emotions felt by the character.

The description of the physical touch between the two, the holding of hands, the caressing, and the kissing of knuckles, creates a sense of intimacy and vulnerability.

The character's emotional state is vividly portrayed, from the trembling hands to the tears spilling over, conveying a sense of relief, gratitude, and joy.

The use of metaphors, such as "his tears finally spilling over" and "his heart was sending all thank you prayers," adds depth and complexity to the emotions expressed.

The passage also suggests a deeper story, hinting at a past ordeal or struggle that the couple has faced, and the relief and gratitude that comes with overcoming it.

Overall, this is a beautifully written passage that effectively conveys the intensity of human emotions and the power of physical touch to express love and gratitude.
*A_AICS
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Aww thank you for your appreciation!
 
Elektra said:
He held her hands as if a little pressure is gonna break her .His own hands trembled as he caress her soft hand a little , feeling her presence,her skin proving him again and again that she's there with him.

His breath hitched as he brought her hands up to his forehead and closed his eyes,his tears finally spilling over.They slid down his cheeks, silent and unrelenting ,as if al the fear, worry and anguish of the past had found the escape.

His heart was sending all thankyou prayers to every god out there who heard him,who didn't let his faith flutter,who saved him by saving her.

He entwined their hands and kissed her knuckles again and again to earn a slurry giggle form her which felt like some one pour ice water on his Burning head .


~oh the relief
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This is so beautifully written! His emotions, the relief, and the depth of his love are truly heart-touching. You’ve captured the moment so well that I could feel his fear and gratitude. Such a powerful scene
 
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