No Need to Prove

[JalJala]

The river flows, it twists, it bends,
It moves without a need to end.
No hurry, no race, no need to prove,
It finds its way; it finds its groove.

The bird takes flight with open wings,
No questions asked of where it sings.
It soars with ease, no thought of why,
It’s free to be, it’s free to fly.

The sun will rise, and warmth will spread,
No need to prove, no need to tread.
It shines for all, no claim, no boast,
It gives its light; it gives the most.

And here we are, alive, aware,
No titles needed, none to compare.
Each breath we take, each step we make,
We simply live, no need to fake.

 

[Anshhi]

The river flows, it twists, it bends,
It moves without a need to end.
No hurry, no race, no need to prove,
It finds its way; it finds its groove.

The bird takes flight with open wings,
No questions asked of where it sings.
It soars with ease, no thought of why,
It’s free to be, it’s free to fly.

The sun will rise, and warmth will spread,
No need to prove, no need to tread.
It shines for all, no claim, no boast,
It gives its light; it gives the most.

And here we are, alive, aware,
No titles needed, none to compare.
Each breath we take, each step we make,
We simply live, no need to fake.

No language. You write poems in a very beautiful way...
*A_AICS

 

[JalJala]

No language. You write poems in a very beautiful way...
*A_AICS

Thank you, for taking the time to read it! Your support really means a lot, and I’m so grateful for your lovely feedback on the poem.

 

[Lion_Hearted]

The river flows, it twists, it bends,
It moves without a need to end.
No hurry, no race, no need to prove,
It finds its way; it finds its groove.

The bird takes flight with open wings,
No questions asked of where it sings.
It soars with ease, no thought of why,
It’s free to be, it’s free to fly.

The sun will rise, and warmth will spread,
No need to prove, no need to tread.
It shines for all, no claim, no boast,
It gives its light; it gives the most.

And here we are, alive, aware,
No titles needed, none to compare.
Each breath we take, each step we make,
We simply live, no need to fake.

This is absolutely stunning, @JalJala! Your words flow as effortlessly as the river you describe. Each stanza captures the essence of freedom and authenticity so gracefully. The imagery of nature—river, bird, sun—serves as a gentle reminder that existence itself is enough.

 

[JalJala]

This is absolutely stunning, @JalJala! Your words flow as effortlessly as the river you describe. Each stanza captures the essence of freedom and authenticity so gracefully. The imagery of nature—river, bird, sun—serves as a gentle reminder that existence itself is enough.

Thank you for taking the time to read it! Your support really means a lot to me, and I’m so grateful for your lovely feedback and insightful observations on the poem.

 

[Lion_Hearted]

Thank you for taking the time to read it! Your support really means a lot to me, and I’m so grateful for your lovely feedback and insightful observations on the poem.

You're most welcome, @JalJala! It's always a joy to read your work and witness the depth of your emotions and creativity. Your words have a way of resonating deeply, and I’m honored to be part of your writing journey. If there's anything you’d like to share or work on, I’m here to support you wholeheartedly! Keep shining through your words.

 

[criss cross]

The river flows, it twists, it bends,
It moves without a need to end.
No hurry, no race, no need to prove,
It finds its way; it finds its groove.

The bird takes flight with open wings,
No questions asked of where it sings.
It soars with ease, no thought of why,
It’s free to be, it’s free to fly.

The sun will rise, and warmth will spread,
No need to prove, no need to tread.
It shines for all, no claim, no boast,
It gives its light; it gives the most.

And here we are, alive, aware,
No titles needed, none to compare.
Each breath we take, each step we make,
We simply live, no need to fake.

We live, we move, just like the stream,
Flowing freely, chasing no dream.
No proof required, no need to show,
We are, and in that, we glow.

 

[URum]

Amazing