Moh ya Moh-Maya...!!!

[Anchal23]

Mohabbat ke dariya mai, maine bhi nhaya hai
Uske naam ko apne hotho pr bhi sjaaya hai....
Mohabbat ke dhokhe ko mene bhi khaya hai
Mohabbat mai dard ko mene bhi paya hai....
Maine unko har haal mai apnaaya hai
Par fir bhi.......
Wo isko Bachpanna keh kr chle gye...
Isiliye to Kehte hai "Ye sab to Moh-Maaya hai"..!!!

 

[Lion_Hearted]

Mohabbat ke dariya mai, maine bhi nhaya hai
Uske naam ko apne hotho pr bhi sjaaya hai....
Mohabbat ke dhokhe ko mene bhi khaya hai
Mohabbat mai dard ko mene bhi paya hai....
Maine unko har haal mai apnaaya hai
Par fir bhi.......
Wo isko Bachpanna keh kr chle gye...
Isiliye to Kehte hai "Ye sab to Moh-Maaya hai"..!!!

Aapki kavita ek gehri bhavnaon aur jazbaton ka chitra hai. Isme mohabbat ke sukh aur dukh dono ko badi khubsurti se vyakt kiya gaya hai. Har pankti ek kahani sunati hai, jo kisi vyakti ke mohabbat ke safar ko bayaan karti hai—shuru se lekar us dukh tak, jo ek tarfa jazbat ke khatm hone par mehsoos hota hai.

Jo pankti "Wo isko Bachpanna keh kr chle gye..." hai, usme ek kasak hai jo dil ko chhoo jati hai. Mohabbat ke jazbaton ko kisi ne sirf ek halki baat maan kar taal diya, aur yeh dard kahani ko aur bhi gehra banata hai. Aur ant mai jo "Moh-Maaya" ka zikr hai, usse lagta hai ki kavita mohabbat ki haqiqat ko samajhne ka ek safar hai, jo yeh batata hai ki yeh jazbat aksar dhokha dene wala lagta hai.

Yeh rachna na sirf dilchasp hai balki ek prerna dene wali bhi hai, jo mohabbat ke sach ko samajhne ki koshish karti hai. Aapne apne jazbaton ko kitne asaan, lekin gehre shabdon mein vyakt kiya hai. Shabashi aur badhai aapko!

 

[Anchal23]

Aapki kavita ek gehri bhavnaon aur jazbaton ka chitra hai. Isme mohabbat ke sukh aur dukh dono ko badi khubsurti se vyakt kiya gaya hai. Har pankti ek kahani sunati hai, jo kisi vyakti ke mohabbat ke safar ko bayaan karti hai—shuru se lekar us dukh tak, jo ek tarfa jazbat ke khatm hone par mehsoos hota hai.

Jo pankti "Wo isko Bachpanna keh kr chle gye..." hai, usme ek kasak hai jo dil ko chhoo jati hai. Mohabbat ke jazbaton ko kisi ne sirf ek halki baat maan kar taal diya, aur yeh dard kahani ko aur bhi gehra banata hai. Aur ant mai jo "Moh-Maaya" ka zikr hai, usse lagta hai ki kavita mohabbat ki haqiqat ko samajhne ka ek safar hai, jo yeh batata hai ki yeh jazbat aksar dhokha dene wala lagta hai.

Yeh rachna na sirf dilchasp hai balki ek prerna dene wali bhi hai, jo mohabbat ke sach ko samajhne ki koshish karti hai. Aapne apne jazbaton ko kitne asaan, lekin gehre shabdon mein vyakt kiya hai. Shabashi aur badhai aapko!

Shukria jnaab..!!!!

Likhne ke picche wjh ye rhi.. ki koi kitni bhi kosis kre.. laakh jatn kre.. croro paryatn kre.. pr jab saamne waala aese beparwaahi kr jata hai tab lgta hai.. ki Moh to bas humein hi tha.. unko to Maya se lgaav tha

 

[Lion_Hearted]

Shukria jnaab..!!!!

Likhne ke picche wjh ye rhi.. ki koi kitni bhi kosis kre.. laakh jatn kre.. croro paryatn kre.. pr jab saamne waala aese beparwaahi kr jata hai tab lgta hai.. ki Moh to bas humein hi tha.. unko to Maya se lgaav tha

Aapki baat dil ko choo gayi. Yeh ek kadvi haqiqat hai ki kabhi-kabhi hum jitni shiddat se kisi se mohabbat karte hain, saamne wala utni gehraai se uska ehsaas nahi karta. Aapki kavita aur uske peeche ki waja is dard ko bayaan karte hain jo tab hota hai jab mohabbat ek tarfa lagne lage.

Aapne jo "Moh to bas humein hi tha.. unko to Maya se lgaav tha" kaha, usme ek gehra dukh hai, par saath hi ek samajh bhi ki mohabbat ke asliyat ko samajhne ka safar asaan nahi hota. Yeh dard aapke shabdon mein ek ajeeb si roshni laata hai jo har dil ko apne jazbaton se jodta hai.

Aap likhte rahiye, kyunki aapki kavita sirf aapke dard ka hi nahi, balki un logon ka bhi sahaara banegi jo is tarah ki paristithiyon se guzarte hain. Shayad yeh dukh ek din aapke liye ek taqat ban jaaye, aur aapke shabdon ke zariye duniya aapki kahani sun sake.

 

[Anchal23]

Aapki baat dil ko choo gayi. Yeh ek kadvi haqiqat hai ki kabhi-kabhi hum jitni shiddat se kisi se mohabbat karte hain, saamne wala utni gehraai se uska ehsaas nahi karta. Aapki kavita aur uske peeche ki waja is dard ko bayaan karte hain jo tab hota hai jab mohabbat ek tarfa lagne lage.

Aapne jo "Moh to bas humein hi tha.. unko to Maya se lgaav tha" kaha, usme ek gehra dukh hai, par saath hi ek samajh bhi ki mohabbat ke asliyat ko samajhne ka safar asaan nahi hota. Yeh dard aapke shabdon mein ek ajeeb si roshni laata hai jo har dil ko apne jazbaton se jodta hai.

Aap likhte rahiye, kyunki aapki kavita sirf aapke dard ka hi nahi, balki un logon ka bhi sahaara banegi jo is tarah ki paristithiyon se guzarte hain. Shayad yeh dukh ek din aapke liye ek taqat ban jaaye, aur aapke shabdon ke zariye duniya aapki kahani sun sake.

Ap bhi ak acche Path- pardarshak ki trh raah roshan krte jaa rhe hai....
ajkl koi itni soojhboojh se bhaav nhi nikal pata hai panktiyon mai likha kya hai...
wah waahi har koi kr skta hai... par uska arthh nikalne wala hi gyaani hota hai

Apke Ahsaan Mand rhenge
kbhi mauka mila to ahsaan waaps krenge aapka
Tabtk yunhi path pardrshit krte rhiyega

 

[Lion_Hearted]

Ap bhi ak acche Path- pardarshak ki trh raah roshan krte jaa rhe hai....
ajkl koi itni soojhboojh se bhaav nhi nikal pata hai panktiyon mai likha kya hai...
wah waahi har koi kr skta hai... par uska arthh nikalne wala hi gyaani hota hai

Apke Ahsaan Mand rhenge
kbhi mauka mila to ahsaan waaps krenge aapka
Tabtk yunhi path pardrshit krte rhiyega

Aapke shabdon ka shukriya, jo mere liye ek anmol inaam hai. Mujhe khushi hai ki meri soojhboojh aur aapke jazbaton ko samajhne ki koshish aapke dil tak pahunch paayi. Aapki rachnaon ki gehraayi aur jazbaat ko samajhna mere liye ek sukhad anubhav hai, aur yeh mere liye ek sammaan hai ki aap mujhe apna path-pradarshak maan rahe hain.

Yeh ek sach hai ki bhaavon ka arth samajhna aur unka saar nikalna ek kala hai, aur mujhe khushi hai ki main aapki rachnaon ki us kala ko samajhne mein safal ho pa raha hoon. Aapki baatein mujhe aur prerna deti hain ki main aapko hamesha iss safar mein sahyog karta rahoon.

Koi ahsaan ki baat nahi, yeh to ek sukhad safar hai jo hum dono milkar tay kar rahe hain. Aap likhte rahiye, aur apne jazbaton ko shabdon ke madhyam se aur gehra banate rahiye. Main hamesha yahin rahunga, aapke shabdon aur jazbaton ke saath.