Jazbaaton ki Ganit..!!!

[Anchal23]

Mai koi Chakori aur wo koi ak Chaand
Kabhi to aesa bhi ho jaayga...
Chakori nisha ki Goad mai khelegi
Aur Chaand Dharti par Mehmaan ho jaayga...
Beeti raat ak Aanshu Tapka
Aanshu uske bheetar ki nami se
Aur nami tapki meri aankhon se
Jagwaalon, is'se behtar kya koi hisaab ho paayega...!!!
Jagwaalon, is'se behtar kya koi hisaab ho paayega...!!!

 

[Lion_Hearted]

Mai koi Chakori aur wo koi ak Chaand
Kabhi to aesa bhi ho jaayga...
Chakori nisha ki Goad mai khelegi
Aur Chaand Dharti par Mehmaan ho jaayga...
Beeti raat ak Aanshu Tapka
Aanshu uske bheetar ki nami se
Aur nami tapki meri aankhon se
Jagwaalon, is'se behtar kya koi hisaab ho paayega...!!!
Jagwaalon, is'se behtar kya koi hisaab ho paayega...!!!

Aapki kavita ek anupam udaharan hai jazbaton ki gehrai aur kalpana ki oonchai ka. Isme jo "Chakori aur Chaand" ka prateek hai, wo mohabbat ki ek adhoori kahani ko bohot hi khoobsurti se vyakt karta hai. Ek taraf ashakt sapne aur doosri taraf ek aisi haqiqat, jo sirf sapno me hi sambhav lagti hai.

"Chakori nisha ki god mai khelegi
Aur Chaand Dharti par Mehmaan ho jaayga..."
Ye panktiyan ek manohar tasveer kheechti hain, jisme ek asambhav sapna sach hota dikhai deta hai. Isme ek chaahat hai, ek umeed hai, aur ek vishwas hai ki kabhi kuch alag bhi ho sakta hai.

Beeti raat ka aansoo aur uska hisaab ek bohot gehra prashn uthata hai—jo dil se dil ka rishta aur uske asar ko samajhne ki ek koshish lagta hai. Aapne dukh, samvedana aur mohabbat ke hisaab ko is tarah vyakt kiya hai ki har shrota ya padhne wala usse juda hua mehsoos karega.

Ant ki panktiyan "Jagwaalon, is'se behtar kya koi hisaab ho paayega..." ek samarthan aur ek vyangya hai, jo man ko sochne par majboor karta hai ki shayad yeh hisaab duniya ke scale par naapna mumkin hi nahi.

Aapki kavita anukaran karne yogya hai aur bohot hi prabhavit karti hai. Shabdon ka chayan aur unki sajawat laajawab hai. Aap likhte rahiye, kyunki aapki rachnayen ek gehra asar chodti hain.

 

[Anchal23]

Aapki kavita ek anupam udaharan hai jazbaton ki gehrai aur kalpana ki oonchai ka. Isme jo "Chakori aur Chaand" ka prateek hai, wo mohabbat ki ek adhoori kahani ko bohot hi khoobsurti se vyakt karta hai. Ek taraf ashakt sapne aur doosri taraf ek aisi haqiqat, jo sirf sapno me hi sambhav lagti hai.

"Chakori nisha ki god mai khelegi
Aur Chaand Dharti par Mehmaan ho jaayga..."
Ye panktiyan ek manohar tasveer kheechti hain, jisme ek asambhav sapna sach hota dikhai deta hai. Isme ek chaahat hai, ek umeed hai, aur ek vishwas hai ki kabhi kuch alag bhi ho sakta hai.

Beeti raat ka aansoo aur uska hisaab ek bohot gehra prashn uthata hai—jo dil se dil ka rishta aur uske asar ko samajhne ki ek koshish lagta hai. Aapne dukh, samvedana aur mohabbat ke hisaab ko is tarah vyakt kiya hai ki har shrota ya padhne wala usse juda hua mehsoos karega.

Ant ki panktiyan "Jagwaalon, is'se behtar kya koi hisaab ho paayega..." ek samarthan aur ek vyangya hai, jo man ko sochne par majboor karta hai ki shayad yeh hisaab duniya ke scale par naapna mumkin hi nahi.

Aapki kavita anukaran karne yogya hai aur bohot hi prabhavit karti hai. Shabdon ka chayan aur unki sajawat laajawab hai. Aap likhte rahiye, kyunki aapki rachnayen ek gehra asar chodti hain.

Waah.. kaafi steeek bhaavarth kia apne ....

Apke in efforts ka tahe dil se shukria... mujhe meri hi jazbaaton ko alg njriye se dekhne ka b mauka mil rha hai... mujhme thoda badlaav bhi aa rha hai.. aur thoda confidence bhi
Shukria!!!

 

[Lion_Hearted]

Waah.. kaafi steeek bhaavarth kia apne ....

Apke in efforts ka tahe dil se shukria... mujhe meri hi jazbaaton ko alg njriye se dekhne ka b mauka mil rha hai... mujhme thoda badlaav bhi aa rha hai.. aur thoda confidence bhi
Shukria!!!

Yeh sunkar mujhe bohot khushi ho rahi hai ki mere shabdon se aapko apne jazbaaton ko ek naye nazariye se dekhne ka mauka mila. Yeh hi to ek sarthak samvaad ka maqsad hota hai—ek doosre ko samajhna aur prerna dena. Aapke shabdon mein jo dard aur sachchai hai, wo ek lekhak ke roop mein aapki takat hai, aur agar usmein confidence ka rang chadh raha hai, to yeh ek bohot bada kadam hai.

Yeh safar aapka hai, aur mujhe khushi hai ki main usme ek chhota sa hissa ban pa raha hoon. Aap likhte rahiye, apne aap ko explore karte rahiye, aur duniya ko apne jazbaton ke rang dikhate rahiye.

Aapne jo shukriya kaha, wo mere liye ek misaal hai ki ek lekhak ka safar kaise doosron ke dil ko choo sakta hai. Yahi jazba aur vishwas aapko aur unchi udaan dega. Main hamesha aapke saath hoon, aapki rachnaon aur jazbaaton ke har mod par.

 

[Timatee]

Mai koi Chakori aur wo koi ak Chaand
Kabhi to aesa bhi ho jaayga...
Chakori nisha ki Goad mai khelegi
Aur Chaand Dharti par Mehmaan ho jaayga...
Beeti raat ak Aanshu Tapka
Aanshu uske bheetar ki nami se
Aur nami tapki meri aankhon se
Jagwaalon, is'se behtar kya koi hisaab ho paayega...!!!
Jagwaalon, is'se behtar kya koi hisaab ho paayega...!!!

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