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Fracture.

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Jaanuu

Favoured Frenzy
I gotta know I'm falling slowly,
From everyone around me.
I gotta know I'm breaking slowly,
From the inside, where pain settles.

I gotta know I'm losing my whole,
Everything I had, everything I have.
I gotta know I'm drowning in sorrow,
Can't breathe at all, suffocating.

I gotta feel the darkness gathering,
Closing in, no escape from the shadows.
I gotta face the emptiness spreading,
Hollowing my soul, piece by piece.

I gotta hear my heart beating weaker,
With every step, every fleeting dream.
I gotta see the light fading quicker,
Leaving me lost, in this endless night.



I really can feel the fracture Right, below my heart that makes me weak and fall down, I know it's an another fall season but, yet it completely takes off all my hopes : )
 
Jaanuu said:
I gotta know I'm falling slowly,
From everyone around me.
I gotta know I'm breaking slowly,
From the inside, where pain settles.

I gotta know I'm losing my whole,
Everything I had, everything I have.
I gotta know I'm drowning in sorrow,
Can't breathe at all, suffocating.

I gotta feel the darkness gathering,
Closing in, no escape from the shadows.
I gotta face the emptiness spreading,
Hollowing my soul, piece by piece.

I gotta hear my heart beating weaker,
With every step, every fleeting dream.
I gotta see the light fading quicker,
Leaving me lost, in this endless night.



I really can feel the fracture Right, below my heart that makes me weak and fall down, I know it's an another fall season but, yet it completely takes off all my hopes : )
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I didn't know that people can write such beautiful poems when they are broken in every way...
*A_AICS
 
Jaanuu said:
I gotta know I'm falling slowly,
From everyone around me.
I gotta know I'm breaking slowly,
From the inside, where pain settles.

I gotta know I'm losing my whole,
Everything I had, everything I have.
I gotta know I'm drowning in sorrow,
Can't breathe at all, suffocating.

I gotta feel the darkness gathering,
Closing in, no escape from the shadows.
I gotta face the emptiness spreading,
Hollowing my soul, piece by piece.

I gotta hear my heart beating weaker,
With every step, every fleeting dream.
I gotta see the light fading quicker,
Leaving me lost, in this endless night.



I really can feel the fracture Right, below my heart that makes me weak and fall down, I know it's an another fall season but, yet it completely takes off all my hopes : )
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Don't worry will consult a cardiologist :)
 
Jaanuu said:
I gotta know I'm falling slowly,
From everyone around me.
I gotta know I'm breaking slowly,
From the inside, where pain settles.

I gotta know I'm losing my whole,
Everything I had, everything I have.
I gotta know I'm drowning in sorrow,
Can't breathe at all, suffocating.

I gotta feel the darkness gathering,
Closing in, no escape from the shadows.
I gotta face the emptiness spreading,
Hollowing my soul, piece by piece.

I gotta hear my heart beating weaker,
With every step, every fleeting dream.
I gotta see the light fading quicker,
Leaving me lost, in this endless night.



I really can feel the fracture Right, below my heart that makes me weak and fall down, I know it's an another fall season but, yet it completely takes off all my hopes : )
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The repetition of "I gotta know" emphasizes the struggle and urgency of the feelings you're expressing. It paints a vivid picture of isolation and the weight of sorrow.
 
Jaanuu said:
I gotta know I'm falling slowly,
From everyone around me.
I gotta know I'm breaking slowly,
From the inside, where pain settles.

I gotta know I'm losing my whole,
Everything I had, everything I have.
I gotta know I'm drowning in sorrow,
Can't breathe at all, suffocating.

I gotta feel the darkness gathering,
Closing in, no escape from the shadows.
I gotta face the emptiness spreading,
Hollowing my soul, piece by piece.

I gotta hear my heart beating weaker,
With every step, every fleeting dream.
I gotta see the light fading quicker,
Leaving me lost, in this endless night.



I really can feel the fracture Right, below my heart that makes me weak and fall down, I know it's an another fall season but, yet it completely takes off all my hopes : )
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Nice one
 
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