Echoes of us

[BellaLuna]

When your hair is grey and eyes sunken
Face marked with wrinkles
When all the love and persons
Who claimed to stay
Have faded
You will remember
One girl, loved the pilgrim soul
In you
And somewhere in this wide universe
Waiting for death
Still she is
With the same heart
Full of love
You'll mumble with yourself
Ah! This fate took us away...

 

[Gupthan]

When your hair is grey and eyes sunken
Face marked with wrinkles
When all the love and persons
Who claimed to stay
Have faded
You will remember
One girl, loved the pilgrim soul
In you
And somewhere in this wide universe
Waiting for death
Still she is
With the same heart
Full of love
You'll mumble with yourself
Ah! This fate took us away...

How are u mrinal......

 

[BellaLuna]

How are u mrinal......

Naaniiiii
I'm fine, doing better

How's Nani?

 

[Nemo]

*sighs* Fate sure does have a way of screwing us all over

Beautifully written @BellaLuna your poem hits hard, really hard, and so relatable

 

[BellaLuna]

*sighs* Fate sure does have a way of screwing us all over

Beautifully written @BellaLuna your poem hits hard, really hard, and so relatable

Fate really have a way of throwing us off balance
But all we need to do is "go with the flow".

 

[Dom55]

When your hair is grey and eyes sunken
Face marked with wrinkles
When all the love and persons
Who claimed to stay
Have faded
You will remember
One girl, loved the pilgrim soul
In you
And somewhere in this wide universe
Waiting for death
Still she is
With the same heart
Full of love
You'll mumble with yourself
Ah! This fate took us away...

Awesome. Salutes you girl for such wonderful write up. Its harsh reality of life. ty for sharing. Keep it up.

 

[BellaLuna]

Awesome. Salutes you girl for such wonderful write up. Its harsh reality of life. ty for sharing. Keep it up.

Ty Dom

 

[Illusion]

When your hair is grey and eyes sunken
Face marked with wrinkles
When all the love and persons
Who claimed to stay
Have faded
You will remember
One girl, loved the pilgrim soul
In you
And somewhere in this wide universe
Waiting for death
Still she is
With the same heart
Full of love
You'll mumble with yourself
Ah! This fate took us away...

The emotion you put in your poem are so raw and relatable gurl.....It really heart touching!! ✿

 

[BellaLuna]

The emotion you put in your poem are so raw and relatable gurl.....It really heart touching!! ✿

I no more have the same ability hahahah

This one I shared from mynotes, wrote years ago.