Doomed

[Freaky]

I don't know if this one will make sense or will be relatable..
But here goes

// Doomed //

It's hand continues ticking
your hands keep holding
no chance of the either stopping.
The question is -
can you destroy it
before it rips you to the bones?
You can try pulling the wires
but none of the colours seem right!
Or is it too late to try?
Time, that's all this is about.
You get to choose - now or later?

Sad part - it's bound to happen
Good part - you know it's bound to happen
So maybe hold on with all your might,
hold on till there's nothing left.
The ticking won't stop? Sure!
But it can fade away
among all the lovely sins.

 

[Atharv]

Haha quite interestig dear. Loved the way you penned it down.

What I see from the post is ..... Its gonna happen for sure. But which one??
Why to bother when we already know the end result.??

If it doesn't hapen "we earn it."
If it happens "we learn from it."

Simple .

 

[KIARA]

I don't know if this one will make sense or will be relatable..
But here goes

// Doomed //

It's hand continues ticking
your hands keep holding
no chance of the either stopping.
The question is -
can you destroy it
before it rips you to the bones?
You can try pulling the wires
but none of the colours seem right!
Or is it too late to try?
Time, that's all this is about.
You get to choose - now or later?

Sad part - it's bound to happen
Good part - you know it's bound to happen
So maybe hold on with all your might,
hold on till there's nothing left.
The ticking won't stop? Sure!
But it can fade away
among all the lovely sins.

U wrote beautifully!!

 

[Aurelía ʚїɞ]

I don't know if this one will make sense or will be relatable..
But here goes

// Doomed //

It's hand continues ticking
your hands keep holding
no chance of the either stopping.
The question is -
can you destroy it
before it rips you to the bones?
You can try pulling the wires
but none of the colours seem right!
Or is it too late to try?
Time, that's all this is about.
You get to choose - now or later?

Sad part - it's bound to happen
Good part - you know it's bound to happen
So maybe hold on with all your might,
hold on till there's nothing left.
The ticking won't stop? Sure!
But it can fade away
among all the lovely sins.

Very ..... Beautiful dear ......
--------------------X---------------------
Standing alone in an empty room,
blindfolded and waiting for my doom.
Suddenly, I hear a childish glee.
This reminds me of something sweet,
but what is it?
I don't know.
Suddenly, I feel a scent of prettiness.
This reminds me of something sweet,
but what is it?
I think I might know.
Suddenly, I taste lips of an angel.
This doesn't remind me of anything.
This I know, is you death angel,
tempting me into the bowels of hell.
Hell, a place ruled by devastating love.
Suicidal love that wants my soul.
Suicidal love that will only get the burnt coal,
where once my heart used to beat.
Standing alone in an empty room,
smashed and crushed facing my doom.
--------------------X---------------------

 

[URum]

Wonderful

 

[URum]

Very ..... Beautiful dear ......
--------------------X---------------------
Standing alone in an empty room,
blindfolded and waiting for my doom.
Suddenly, I hear a childish glee.
This reminds me of something sweet,
but what is it?
I don't know.
Suddenly, I feel a scent of prettiness.
This reminds me of something sweet,
but what is it?
I think I might know.
Suddenly, I taste lips of an angel.
This doesn't remind me of anything.
This I know, is you death angel,
tempting me into the bowels of hell.
Hell, a place ruled by devastating love.
Suicidal love that wants my soul.
Suicidal love that will only get the burnt coal,
where once my heart used to beat.
Standing alone in an empty room,
smashed and crushed facing my doom.
--------------------X---------------------

Wow great