Correct Me, Don’t Break Me

[miamor]

Sitting alone in the quiet night,
Wondering why we had to fight.
Your silence feels like endless rain,
Falling deep into my pain.

Like the wind that shakes the trees,
Or waves that crash into the seas,
Nature turns wild without a clue,
Just like I don't understand you.

But when the sky begins to roar,
I kneel and pray a little more.
For nature’s wrath, I have no say,
But for your heart, I’ll find a way.

Don’t let the distance pull us tight,
Let’s fix what’s wrong and make it right.
Correct my faults, don’t let them grow,
Teach me the things I need to know.

Love is strong, yet soft and true,
Like gentle drops of morning dew.
Don’t be the storm that drifts away,
Stay with me and light my way.

Break the silence please

 

[Anshhi]

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Sitting alone in the quiet night,
Wondering why we had to fight.
Your silence feels like endless rain,
Falling deep into my pain.

Like the wind that shakes the trees,
Or waves that crash into the seas,
Nature turns wild without a clue,
Just like I don't understand you.

But when the sky begins to roar,
I kneel and pray a little more.
For nature’s wrath, I have no say,
But for your heart, I’ll find a way.

Don’t let the distance pull us tight,
Let’s fix what’s wrong and make it right.
Correct my faults, don’t let them grow,
Teach me the things I need to know.

Love is strong, yet soft and true,
Like gentle drops of morning dew.
Don’t be the storm that drifts away,
Stay with me and light my way.

Break the silence please

That's a beautiful and emotional poem. It expresses a deep longing for connection and understanding in a relationship. The speaker is reaching out to the other person, asking them to break the silence and to work together to fix the issues that have driven them apart.

The use of natural imagery, such as the rain, wind, trees, and seas, adds to the emotional impact of the poem, emphasizing the turmoil and uncertainty that the speaker is feeling. The contrast between the power of nature and the speaker's own powerlessness to change the situation is particularly effective.

The poem also expresses a desire for growth and learning, with the speaker asking the other person to teach them and to help them become a better person. The final image of the morning dew is a beautiful and hopeful one, suggesting that even in the midst of turmoil, there is always the possibility for renewal and rebirth.

Overall, your poem is a heartfelt and moving expression of the human desire for connection and understanding.
*A_AICS

 

[NaaIstam]

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Sitting alone in the quiet night,
Wondering why we had to fight.
Your silence feels like endless rain,
Falling deep into my pain.

Like the wind that shakes the trees,
Or waves that crash into the seas,
Nature turns wild without a clue,
Just like I don't understand you.

But when the sky begins to roar,
I kneel and pray a little more.
For nature’s wrath, I have no say,
But for your heart, I’ll find a way.

Don’t let the distance pull us tight,
Let’s fix what’s wrong and make it right.
Correct my faults, don’t let them grow,
Teach me the things I need to know.

Love is strong, yet soft and true,
Like gentle drops of morning dew.
Don’t be the storm that drifts away,
Stay with me and light my way.

Break the silence please

And
My life is like RIM
Without HIM

 

[mysteriouzz]

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Sitting alone in the quiet night,
Wondering why we had to fight.
Your silence feels like endless rain,
Falling deep into my pain.

Like the wind that shakes the trees,
Or waves that crash into the seas,
Nature turns wild without a clue,
Just like I don't understand you.

But when the sky begins to roar,
I kneel and pray a little more.
For nature’s wrath, I have no say,
But for your heart, I’ll find a way.

Don’t let the distance pull us tight,
Let’s fix what’s wrong and make it right.
Correct my faults, don’t let them grow,
Teach me the things I need to know.

Love is strong, yet soft and true,
Like gentle drops of morning dew.
Don’t be the storm that drifts away,
Stay with me and light my way.

Break the silence please

Vokey vokey kopam vasthey thidatha le silent war cheyyanu le

 

[ɢʀɪᴍᴍᴜʜ]

 

[miamor]

Vokey vokey kopam vasthey thidatha le silent war cheyyanu le

kopam kuda vacheyla cheskonu nenu..