A Diamond in the Rough

[ThampraN]

A diamond she is, a beacon of beauty,
Worried of her looks, how others might see.
Should she really? I wouldn’t dare,
For she radiates elegance, peerless and rare.

Her smile, beyond compare, a radiant glimmer,
Her character, one of a kind, uniquely defined.
Mind still shattered, from scars of the past;
The love once found, too fast, too soon,
Beyond repair? I wouldn’t say,
For she deserves better, no less, come what may.

Thoughts guiding her in paths where no light shines;
May God shine light on her, weaving threads of love.
Let her walk on flower roads of love and life,
For she has a purpose, in life, not yet fulfilled.

Somewhere I see a glimpse of faith, a hand of God;
Reach in to it, let it lift her up, rise and shine.

 

[shivagni]

awww how can u portray her sooo beautifully....

 

[Lovelygal_Sri]

A diamond she is, a beacon of beauty,
Worried of her looks, how others might see.
Should she really? I wouldn’t dare,
For she radiates elegance, peerless and rare.

Her smile, beyond compare, a radiant glimmer,
Her character, one of a kind, uniquely defined.
Mind still shattered, from scars of the past;
The love once found, too fast, too soon,
Beyond repair? I wouldn’t say,
For she deserves better, no less, come what may.

Thoughts guiding her in paths where no light shines;
May God shine light on her, weaving threads of love.
Let her walk on flower roads of love and life,
For she has a purpose, in life, not yet fulfilled.

Somewhere I see a glimpse of faith, a hand of God;
Reach in to it, let it lift her up, rise and shine.
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Nice

 

[Mozart]

Good one bro !!

 

[Anshhi]

A diamond she is, a beacon of beauty,
Worried of her looks, how others might see.
Should she really? I wouldn’t dare,
For she radiates elegance, peerless and rare.

Her smile, beyond compare, a radiant glimmer,
Her character, one of a kind, uniquely defined.
Mind still shattered, from scars of the past;
The love once found, too fast, too soon,
Beyond repair? I wouldn’t say,
For she deserves better, no less, come what may.

Thoughts guiding her in paths where no light shines;
May God shine light on her, weaving threads of love.
Let her walk on flower roads of love and life,
For she has a purpose, in life, not yet fulfilled.

Somewhere I see a glimpse of faith, a hand of God;
Reach in to it, let it lift her up, rise and shine.
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[AvivA]

A diamond she is, a beacon of beauty,
Worried of her looks, how others might see.
Should she really? I wouldn’t dare,
For she radiates elegance, peerless and rare.

Her smile, beyond compare, a radiant glimmer,
Her character, one of a kind, uniquely defined.
Mind still shattered, from scars of the past;
The love once found, too fast, too soon,
Beyond repair? I wouldn’t say,
For she deserves better, no less, come what may.

Thoughts guiding her in paths where no light shines;
May God shine light on her, weaving threads of love.
Let her walk on flower roads of love and life,
For she has a purpose, in life, not yet fulfilled.

Somewhere I see a glimpse of faith, a hand of God;
Reach in to it, let it lift her up, rise and shine.
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[sulthan]

A diamond she is, a beacon of beauty,
Worried of her looks, how others might see.
Should she really? I wouldn’t dare,
For she radiates elegance, peerless and rare.

Her smile, beyond compare, a radiant glimmer,
Her character, one of a kind, uniquely defined.
Mind still shattered, from scars of the past;
The love once found, too fast, too soon,
Beyond repair? I wouldn’t say,
For she deserves better, no less, come what may.

Thoughts guiding her in paths where no light shines;
May God shine light on her, weaving threads of love.
Let her walk on flower roads of love and life,
For she has a purpose, in life, not yet fulfilled.

Somewhere I see a glimpse of faith, a hand of God;
Reach in to it, let it lift her up, rise and shine.
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Nice one...the lines are so deep..absolute talent brotha

 

[Lion_Hearted]

A diamond she is, a beacon of beauty,
Worried of her looks, how others might see.
Should she really? I wouldn’t dare,
For she radiates elegance, peerless and rare.

Her smile, beyond compare, a radiant glimmer,
Her character, one of a kind, uniquely defined.
Mind still shattered, from scars of the past;
The love once found, too fast, too soon,
Beyond repair? I wouldn’t say,
For she deserves better, no less, come what may.

Thoughts guiding her in paths where no light shines;
May God shine light on her, weaving threads of love.
Let her walk on flower roads of love and life,
For she has a purpose, in life, not yet fulfilled.

Somewhere I see a glimpse of faith, a hand of God;
Reach in to it, let it lift her up, rise and shine.
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What a beautiful and heartfelt poem! It speaks of admiration and hope, reflecting a deep desire for someone to heal, find love, and rediscover their purpose. The imagery of a diamond radiating beauty, even amidst struggle, is powerful. You’ve woven a message of encouragement, faith, and the belief that there is still potential for greatness despite past wounds. It feels like a poem meant to uplift and inspire.

 

[ThampraN]

awww how can u portray her sooo beautifully....

Wow... thanks for your kind words... Here I was thinking, did I mess it up?

 

[ThampraN]

Nice

Thank you

 

[ThampraN]

Good one bro !!

Thanks bro..

 

[ThampraN]

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Thanks

 

[shivagni]

Wow... thanks for your kind words... Here I was thinking, did I mess it up?

not at alll..... its beautifully written

 

[ThampraN]

 

[ThampraN]

Nice one...the lines are so deep..absolute talent brotha

Thanks for the kind words brotha

 

[Dom55]

Awesome beauty. Well written.

 

[ThampraN]

What a beautiful and heartfelt poem! It speaks of admiration and hope, reflecting a deep desire for someone to heal, find love, and rediscover their purpose. The imagery of a diamond radiating beauty, even amidst struggle, is powerful. You’ve woven a message of encouragement, faith, and the belief that there is still potential for greatness despite past wounds. It feels like a poem meant to uplift and inspire.
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m truly glad the poem resonated with you. It's written for a person I know, depicting their real nature. So it's special.

 

[ThampraN]

not at alll..... its beautifully written

Thanks again

 

[ThampraN]

Awesome beauty. Well written.

Thanks for the kind words dom

 

[Lion_Hearted]

Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m truly glad the poem resonated with you. It's written for a person I know, depicting their real nature. So it's special.

It's a biggest compliment for me