தேடிப் பெற்ற பூமகள் ( Thaedi Petra Poo Magal ) - Kavidhai 2

[Chandrayan]

valigal thaandi
vinnaith thottu
thaedi petra poo magale!
undhan punnagaithan eththunai azhagu!
korthtu vaiththa muththukkalaai
un pal varisai...
indru malarntha rojaavaai
un sevvidhazhgal...
palinigin prathiyaai
un sangu kazhuththu...
vinmeen umizhum
velicham thorkkum
un vizhi veesum paarvaithanil!
iniyavale..
idhigaasangal podhadhu...
un azhagai iyatrida...

 

[Mathii]

valigal thaandi
vinnaith thottu
thaedi petra poo magale!
undhan punnagaithan eththunai azhagu!
korthtu vaiththa muththukkalaai
un pal varisai...
indru malarntha rojaavaai
un sevvidhazhgal...
palinigin prathiyaai
un sangu kazhuththu...
vinmeen umizhum
velicham thorkkum
un vizhi veesum paarvaithanil!
iniyavale..
idhigaasangal podhadhu...
un azhagai iyatrida...


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Nice

 

[Chandrayan]

Nice

Thank you Bro!

 

[Maayaa ❤️]

valigal thaandi
vinnaith thottu
thaedi petra poo magale!
undhan punnagaithan eththunai azhagu!
korthtu vaiththa muththukkalaai
un pal varisai...
indru malarntha rojaavaai
un sevvidhazhgal...
palinigin prathiyaai
un sangu kazhuththu...
vinmeen umizhum
velicham thorkkum
un vizhi veesum paarvaithanil!
iniyavale..
idhigaasangal podhadhu...
un azhagai iyatrida...


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Nice

 

[Chandrayan]

Nice

Thank you Amaya!!!

 

[Honey bunch]

valigal thaandi
vinnaith thottu
thaedi petra poo magale!
undhan punnagaithan eththunai azhagu!
korthtu vaiththa muththukkalaai
un pal varisai...
indru malarntha rojaavaai
un sevvidhazhgal...
palinigin prathiyaai
un sangu kazhuththu...
vinmeen umizhum
velicham thorkkum
un vizhi veesum paarvaithanil!
iniyavale..
idhigaasangal podhadhu...
un azhagai iyatrida...


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Nice can you correct the yezhuthu pizhai in Tamil....

 

[Chandrayan]

Nice can you correct the yezhuthu pizhai in Tamil....

nandri Honey Bunch.. Thiruthidalam.. But its hard to edit it again. next kavidhai will be perfectly spelled.

 

[Honey bunch]

nandri Honey Bunch.. Thiruthidalam.. But its hard to edit it again. next kavidhai will be perfectly spelled.

Good good ..
Nice lines......

 

[Honey bunch]

Nice

En enoda reply ku envy reaction kudukureenga

 

[Honey bunch]

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