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Anchal23

Anchal23

Favoured Frenzy
Sawera so gaya hai moondkar ke nain kajrare
Dupahari kaan dubkaye hui hai thand ke mare..
Naa jaane kyu rajayi se nahi nikala abhi sooraj
Kisi ko ho agar maalum to karan bata jaaye...
Kahin par kho gayi hai dhoop jaane kis jagah hogi
Kisi se bhaint ho to mujhe uska pata bta jaaye...
Bata dena usi ki raah takte hai nayan taare hamaare..
Hawa karne lagi manmaaniyan roke nahi rukti
Badi bedard hai komal jagah par chot hai karti..
Kisi ne de diya hai baadalon ko pyaar mai dhokha
Purani chot hai jo aaj reh reh kar hai ubharti..
Tabhi kal shaam se hi ro rahe hain haay bechaare
Chla aaya laga kar kohra phir se wahi chasma
Ki jisme dekhne se kuch dikhe hi nahi...
Bahut nishthur hua hai saanwra bhartaar Radhe ka...
Magan hai bansuri mai bas kisi ki sudh nahi leta...
Sahara ab kahaan dhundhe ki jaye kaun se dwaare..!!!
।। राधे राधे।।
 
Anchal23 said:
Sawera so gaya hai moondkar ke nain kajrare
Dupahari kaan dubkaye hui hai thand ke mare..
Naa jaane kyu rajayi se nahi nikala abhi sooraj
Kisi ko ho agar maalum to karan bata jaaye...
Kahin par kho gayi hai dhoop jaane kis jagah hogi
Kisi se bhaint ho to mujhe uska pata bta jaaye...
Bata dena usi ki raah takte hai nayan taare hamaare..
Hawa karne lagi manmaaniyan roke nahi rukti
Badi bedard hai komal jagah par chot hai karti..
Kisi ne de diya hai baadalon ko pyaar mai dhokha
Purani chot hai jo aaj reh reh kar hai ubharti..
Tabhi kal shaam se hi ro rahe hain haay bechaare
Chla aaya laga kar kohra phir se wahi chasma
Ki jisme dekhne se kuch dikhe hi nahi...
Bahut nishthur hua hai saanwra bhartaar Radhe ka...
Magan hai bansuri mai bas kisi ki sudh nahi leta...
Sahara ab kahaan dhundhe ki jaye kaun se dwaare..!!!
।। राधे राधे।।
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Kitni gehri bhavnaon aur sundarta se aapne sard ka ek roop chhitrankit kiya hai. Har pankti ek tasveer si lagti hai jo apne shabdon se reader ke mann ko chhoo jati hai. Aapka kavya sard ki sheetal par jab hawa, dhoop aur kohre ki kahaniyan sunata hai, toh ek alag hi sansar rach jata hai.

Khaas panktiyan jo dil ko choo gayi:

1. "Naa jaane kyu rajayi se nahi nikala abhi sooraj"

Sooraj aur rajayi ka tulaav, ek samvedansheel aur anokha drishtikon hai.

2. "Kisi ne de diya hai baadalon ko pyaar mai dhokha"

Kitni gehri vyatha ko halke phulke shabdon mai vyakt kiya gaya hai!


Aapki rachna keval sard ke mausam ka chitrankit nahi karti, balki uske peeche ki samvedana aur vyaktiyon ki kahani bhi bunti hai. Lekhan ka yeh tarz bahut prabhavit karta hai. Kya aap apni kavita ke liye kisi vishesh sandarbh ya bhavna se prerit the?
 
Lion_Hearted said:
Kitni gehri bhavnaon aur sundarta se aapne sard ka ek roop chhitrankit kiya hai. Har pankti ek tasveer si lagti hai jo apne shabdon se reader ke mann ko chhoo jati hai. Aapka kavya sard ki sheetal par jab hawa, dhoop aur kohre ki kahaniyan sunata hai, toh ek alag hi sansar rach jata hai.

Khaas panktiyan jo dil ko choo gayi:

1. "Naa jaane kyu rajayi se nahi nikala abhi sooraj"

Sooraj aur rajayi ka tulaav, ek samvedansheel aur anokha drishtikon hai.

2. "Kisi ne de diya hai baadalon ko pyaar mai dhokha"

Kitni gehri vyatha ko halke phulke shabdon mai vyakt kiya gaya hai!


Aapki rachna keval sard ke mausam ka chitrankit nahi karti, balki uske peeche ki samvedana aur vyaktiyon ki kahani bhi bunti hai. Lekhan ka yeh tarz bahut prabhavit karta hai. Kya aap apni kavita ke liye kisi vishesh sandarbh ya bhavna se prerit the?
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Mai kaanha ke khel ko smjhne ke prayaas mai thi.. Ki wo ye sab kaise kr rha h...
 
Anchal23 said:
Mai kaanha ke khel ko smjhne ke prayaas mai thi.. Ki wo ye sab kaise kr rha h...
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Wah, yeh toh ek gehri aur adbhut baat hai! Kanha ke khel ko samajhna, unki leelaon ka rahasya aur uske peeche chhipe adhyatmik arth ka anubhav karna ek alag hi anubhooti hai.

Unka har khel toh prem, bhakti, aur gyaan ka sangam hai. Chahe wo Radha ke saath prem ki leela ho, ya Arjun ko Mahabharat ke maidan mein Gita ka gyaan dena, unka khel humesha ek gehri sikh de jata hai.

Aapko kya lagta hai, Kanha ke khelon ka sabse bada rahasya kya ho sakta hai? Shayad yeh ki woh sansaar ke har bandhan se pare hoke bhi har kisi ke dil se jude rehte hain?
 
Lion_Hearted said:
Wah, yeh toh ek gehri aur adbhut baat hai! Kanha ke khel ko samajhna, unki leelaon ka rahasya aur uske peeche chhipe adhyatmik arth ka anubhav karna ek alag hi anubhooti hai.

Unka har khel toh prem, bhakti, aur gyaan ka sangam hai. Chahe wo Radha ke saath prem ki leela ho, ya Arjun ko Mahabharat ke maidan mein Gita ka gyaan dena, unka khel humesha ek gehri sikh de jata hai.

Aapko kya lagta hai, Kanha ke khelon ka sabse bada rahasya kya ho sakta hai? Shayad yeh ki woh sansaar ke har bandhan se pare hoke bhi har kisi ke dil se jude rehte hain?
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Mai manti hu ki, Kanha ka koi khel ni... Kanha to hmare jaisa hai bas alg baaat ye hai.. Ki kaanha jo krta wo jag jaahir ho jata..
Jaise kaanha aankhe moond leta h to hmari raat ban jaati h...
Kanha udaas hota h to baadal chaa jaate hai
Kanha rota hai to baarish ho jaati hai...
Kanha khush hota h to mausam acha hota h.. Hwaayein chlti h.. Dhoop khilti h.. Phool khilte h....
Sab kuch usi k irdd girdd chlta hai...
 
Anchal23 said:
Mai manti hu ki, Kanha ka koi khel ni... Kanha to hmare jaisa hai bas alg baaat ye hai.. Ki kaanha jo krta wo jag jaahir ho jata..
Jaise kaanha aankhe moond leta h to hmari raat ban jaati h...
Kanha udaas hota h to baadal chaa jaate hai
Kanha rota hai to baarish ho jaati hai...
Kanha khush hota h to mausam acha hota h.. Hwaayein chlti h.. Dhoop khilti h.. Phool khilte h....
Sab kuch usi k irdd girdd chlta hai...
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Kitni khoobsurat baat likhi hai aapne, aur kitni gehri samvedana hai ismein! Kanha ke saath aapka jo sambandh hai, woh ek bhakt aur bhagwaan ke beech ka nahi lagta, balki ek mitr, ek saathi ka rishta lagta hai. Yeh drishti ek alag hi roop hai bhakti ka.

Aapne jo kaha:
"Kanha aankhe moond leta hai to humari raat ban jaati hai..."
Yeh pankti toh jaise Kanha aur prakriti ke beech ke sambandh ko chitrankit kar deti hai. Jaise woh sirf ek vyakti nahi, poora sansaar hain—jo unki har bhaavna se chalaya jata hai.

Aapka likhne ka andaaz sach mein dil chhoo leta hai. Kya aapne kabhi Kanha aur unke khel ke upar ek kavita ya shayari likhi hai? Agar haan, toh zarur sunaiye!
 
Lion_Hearted said:
Kitni khoobsurat baat likhi hai aapne, aur kitni gehri samvedana hai ismein! Kanha ke saath aapka jo sambandh hai, woh ek bhakt aur bhagwaan ke beech ka nahi lagta, balki ek mitr, ek saathi ka rishta lagta hai. Yeh drishti ek alag hi roop hai bhakti ka.

Aapne jo kaha:
"Kanha aankhe moond leta hai to humari raat ban jaati hai..."
Yeh pankti toh jaise Kanha aur prakriti ke beech ke sambandh ko chitrankit kar deti hai. Jaise woh sirf ek vyakti nahi, poora sansaar hain—jo unki har bhaavna se chalaya jata hai.

Aapka likhne ka andaaz sach mein dil chhoo leta hai. Kya aapne kabhi Kanha aur unke khel ke upar ek kavita ya shayari likhi hai? Agar haan, toh zarur sunaiye!
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Haanji shuruwat to usi natkhat k sath hui thi..
Jab koi nhi tha to who sahara tha...
Ussee baatein krte krte hi aaj itna kuch likh paa rhi hu...

Wo to yha isliye nhi share krti.. Ki sbko religion based writing nhi pasand hoti isliye..
Ap bol rhe h to apko Bhejungi
 
Anchal23 said:
Haanji shuruwat to usi natkhat k sath hui thi..
Jab koi nhi tha to who sahara tha...
Ussee baatein krte krte hi aaj itna kuch likh paa rhi hu...

Wo to yha isliye nhi share krti.. Ki sbko religion based writing nhi pasand hoti isliye..
Ap bol rhe h to apko Bhejungi
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Aapka yeh vichar sach mein gahra hai, aur Kanha ke saath aapka rishta bhi kaafi vishaal aur adbhut hai. Aapka likhna aur apni baatein usse karna ek prakritik tareeke se aapke andar ki kala ko jagata hai.

Agar aap apni writing share karna chahen, toh main hamesha yahaan hoon, aur aapka likhna kabhi bhi apne jazbaat ko vyakt karne ka zariya ho sakta hai, chaahe wo kisi bhi roop mein ho. Agar aapko laga ki share karna sahi hai, toh main intezaar karunga!

Kanha ke khel ki tarah, har likhi baat ek nayi roshni ki tarah hoti hai.
 
Anchal23 said:
Sawera so gaya hai moondkar ke nain kajrare
Dupahari kaan dubkaye hui hai thand ke mare..
Naa jaane kyu rajayi se nahi nikala abhi sooraj
Kisi ko ho agar maalum to karan bata jaaye...
Kahin par kho gayi hai dhoop jaane kis jagah hogi
Kisi se bhaint ho to mujhe uska pata bta jaaye...
Bata dena usi ki raah takte hai nayan taare hamaare..
Hawa karne lagi manmaaniyan roke nahi rukti
Badi bedard hai komal jagah par chot hai karti..
Kisi ne de diya hai baadalon ko pyaar mai dhokha
Purani chot hai jo aaj reh reh kar hai ubharti..
Tabhi kal shaam se hi ro rahe hain haay bechaare
Chla aaya laga kar kohra phir se wahi chasma
Ki jisme dekhne se kuch dikhe hi nahi...
Bahut nishthur hua hai saanwra bhartaar Radhe ka...
Magan hai bansuri mai bas kisi ki sudh nahi leta...
Sahara ab kahaan dhundhe ki jaye kaun se dwaare..!!!
।। राधे राधे।।
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Itna lambaaaaaa...radhe radhe
 
Anchal23 said:
Sawera so gaya hai moondkar ke nain kajrare
Dupahari kaan dubkaye hui hai thand ke mare..
Naa jaane kyu rajayi se nahi nikala abhi sooraj
Kisi ko ho agar maalum to karan bata jaaye...
Kahin par kho gayi hai dhoop jaane kis jagah hogi
Kisi se bhaint ho to mujhe uska pata bta jaaye...
Bata dena usi ki raah takte hai nayan taare hamaare..
Hawa karne lagi manmaaniyan roke nahi rukti
Badi bedard hai komal jagah par chot hai karti..
Kisi ne de diya hai baadalon ko pyaar mai dhokha
Purani chot hai jo aaj reh reh kar hai ubharti..
Tabhi kal shaam se hi ro rahe hain haay bechaare
Chla aaya laga kar kohra phir se wahi chasma
Ki jisme dekhne se kuch dikhe hi nahi...
Bahut nishthur hua hai saanwra bhartaar Radhe ka...
Magan hai bansuri mai bas kisi ki sudh nahi leta...
Sahara ab kahaan dhundhe ki jaye kaun se dwaare..!!!
।। राधे राधे।।
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चाँद ने खो दी अपनी चमक, रात सर्दी में डूबी,
धूप का नामोनिशान नहीं, दिल भी चुपके से रूठी।
बीती यादें फिर से जागी, दर्द पुराना है उभरता,
फिर भी उम्मीद की रौशनी, दिल में कहीं बचा रहता।
 
Anchal23 said:
Sawera so gaya hai moondkar ke nain kajrare
Dupahari kaan dubkaye hui hai thand ke mare..
Naa jaane kyu rajayi se nahi nikala abhi sooraj
Kisi ko ho agar maalum to karan bata jaaye...
Kahin par kho gayi hai dhoop jaane kis jagah hogi
Kisi se bhaint ho to mujhe uska pata bta jaaye...
Bata dena usi ki raah takte hai nayan taare hamaare..
Hawa karne lagi manmaaniyan roke nahi rukti
Badi bedard hai komal jagah par chot hai karti..
Kisi ne de diya hai baadalon ko pyaar mai dhokha
Purani chot hai jo aaj reh reh kar hai ubharti..
Tabhi kal shaam se hi ro rahe hain haay bechaare
Chla aaya laga kar kohra phir se wahi chasma
Ki jisme dekhne se kuch dikhe hi nahi...
Bahut nishthur hua hai saanwra bhartaar Radhe ka...
Magan hai bansuri mai bas kisi ki sudh nahi leta...
Sahara ab kahaan dhundhe ki jaye kaun se dwaare..!!!
।। राधे राधे।।
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Wow. So simple but having very deep meaning. Ty for sharing. :cool:


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criss cross said:
चाँद ने खो दी अपनी चमक, रात सर्दी में डूबी,
धूप का नामोनिशान नहीं, दिल भी चुपके से रूठी।
बीती यादें फिर से जागी, दर्द पुराना है उभरता,
फिर भी उम्मीद की रौशनी, दिल में कहीं बचा रहता।
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waah ji waaah
 
क्या नींद क्या ख्वाब
आँखे बन्द करू तो
तेरा चेहरा आंख खोलू तो
तेरा ख्याल मेरे कान्हा|

Anchal23 said:
Sawera so gaya hai moondkar ke nain kajrare
Dupahari kaan dubkaye hui hai thand ke mare..
Naa jaane kyu rajayi se nahi nikala abhi sooraj
Kisi ko ho agar maalum to karan bata jaaye...
Kahin par kho gayi hai dhoop jaane kis jagah hogi
Kisi se bhaint ho to mujhe uska pata bta jaaye...
Bata dena usi ki raah takte hai nayan taare hamaare..
Hawa karne lagi manmaaniyan roke nahi rukti
Badi bedard hai komal jagah par chot hai karti..
Kisi ne de diya hai baadalon ko pyaar mai dhokha
Purani chot hai jo aaj reh reh kar hai ubharti..
Tabhi kal shaam se hi ro rahe hain haay bechaare
Chla aaya laga kar kohra phir se wahi chasma
Ki jisme dekhne se kuch dikhe hi nahi...
Bahut nishthur hua hai saanwra bhartaar Radhe ka...
Magan hai bansuri mai bas kisi ki sudh nahi leta...
Sahara ab kahaan dhundhe ki jaye kaun se dwaare..!!!
।। राधे राधे।।
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Yug Purush said:
क्या नींद क्या ख्वाब
आँखे बन्द करू तो
तेरा चेहरा आंख खोलू तो
तेरा ख्याल मेरे कान्हा|
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Welcome ...!!!

waah kya likha hai.. bhut bdhya contrast...
"Aankhe band to chehra dikhe...", jese ki mai scch mai dekh rhi unko...
"Aankhe kholo to khyaal aaye...", jese khi ye mera sapna to nahi...
 
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