This is a beautiful and heartfelt expression of the deep bond and love for a mother. The poem reflects on the selfless care, unconditional love, and sacrifices made by a mother, and the longing for her presence, especially in times of struggle or emotional distress. The imagery and sentiments you have captured truly evoke the irreplaceable role of a mother in one's life, emphasizing how her warmth, love, and blessings continue to be cherished even when she’s not physically around. It’s a touching tribute to the power of a mother's love.
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Lion_Hearted
Lion_Hearted
"Happy Birthday, Anchal ki 'Anchal'. Aapki yaadein humesha mere saath hain, Maa. Aapki mithi muskaan, aapki har baat, har pal meri zindagi ka hissa bani hui hai. Aapki duaon ka asar har mod par mehsoos hota hai. Aaj bhi jab kuch thoda sa bhi mushkil hota hai, toh aapki yaad dil ko shaanti deti hai. Aapke bina har din adhura sa lagta hai. Aap hamare dilon mein hamesha zinda rahengi, Maa."
Anchal23
@Lion_Hearted Thank you!!!
Lion_Hearted
"Sir pe haath pher MAA ab pyaar se sehlaati nahi,
Maa sapno mein aakar, aashirwad dene aati rahi.
Nir-Swarth Maa ki dua jaisi dua ab kahin se aati nahi,
Aaj swarth ke liye duniya pyar dikhane aati rahi.
Mere har kashhto ko apna kar, apne dard ko chupaye rakhti,
Har dard mein, har pal, Maa teri yaad tarsaati rahi.
Mujhe hansaane ke liye, apne gham ko apne dil mein chhupaayi,
Meri muskaan bhi Maa, tujhe kabhi bhool paayi nahi.
Ek baar haal-chaal jo poochne ki awaaz aayi nahi,
Jeevan ke har mod par, Maa teri yaad tarsaati rahi."
Maa sapno mein aakar, aashirwad dene aati rahi.
Nir-Swarth Maa ki dua jaisi dua ab kahin se aati nahi,
Aaj swarth ke liye duniya pyar dikhane aati rahi.
Mere har kashhto ko apna kar, apne dard ko chupaye rakhti,
Har dard mein, har pal, Maa teri yaad tarsaati rahi.
Mujhe hansaane ke liye, apne gham ko apne dil mein chhupaayi,
Meri muskaan bhi Maa, tujhe kabhi bhool paayi nahi.
Ek baar haal-chaal jo poochne ki awaaz aayi nahi,
Jeevan ke har mod par, Maa teri yaad tarsaati rahi."
Anchal23
@Lion_Hearted Gud alteration
Lion_Hearted
Shukriya! Main aapke liye kuch aur behtar aur khoobsurat vichar karne ki koshish karta hoon. Yahaan ek aur roop hai jo aapke dard aur pyaar ko aur gehraayi se darshata hai:
"Sir par haath pher MAA, ab pyaar se sehlaati nahi,
Maa sapno mein aakar, aashirwad dene aati rahi.
Ni-swartth Maa ki dua jaisi dua, kahin se aati nahi,
Aaj swarth ki duniya, pyar dikhane aati rahi.
Mere har dard ko apna kar, apne aansu chhupati rahi,
Har kashti mein, Maa, teri yaad mujhe tarsaati rahi.
Mujhe hansaane ke liye, apne gham ko apne dil mein chhupaati rahi,
Meri muskaan ki raah mein, Maa, tujhe kabhi bhool paayi nahi.
Ek baar bhi haal chaal poochti hui awaaz nahi aayi,
Jeevan ke har mod par, Maa, teri yaad dil ko tarsaati rahi."
Shukriya! Main aapke liye kuch aur behtar aur khoobsurat vichar karne ki koshish karta hoon. Yahaan ek aur roop hai jo aapke dard aur pyaar ko aur gehraayi se darshata hai:"Sir par haath pher MAA, ab pyaar se sehlaati nahi,
Maa sapno mein aakar, aashirwad dene aati rahi.
Ni-swartth Maa ki dua jaisi dua, kahin se aati nahi,
Aaj swarth ki duniya, pyar dikhane aati rahi.
Mere har dard ko apna kar, apne aansu chhupati rahi,
Har kashti mein, Maa, teri yaad mujhe tarsaati rahi.
Mujhe hansaane ke liye, apne gham ko apne dil mein chhupaati rahi,
Meri muskaan ki raah mein, Maa, tujhe kabhi bhool paayi nahi.
Ek baar bhi haal chaal poochti hui awaaz nahi aayi,
Jeevan ke har mod par, Maa, teri yaad dil ko tarsaati rahi."
Anchal23
@Lion_Hearted Bhut accha likha aapne...
par ye rishta aesa h naa... yha sb jabbaat apne aap jaahir hai.. apne kuch extra shabd lgaa diye h.. wo shayd nhi hone chaiye.. kyuki apne jo shabd lgaaye wo to aap ahsaas hi bta de rhe ho.. jbki unn shabd k bina bhi dil se ahsaas ho rha hai wo bhi aese jese aansu aane h wale h
par ye rishta aesa h naa... yha sb jabbaat apne aap jaahir hai.. apne kuch extra shabd lgaa diye h.. wo shayd nhi hone chaiye.. kyuki apne jo shabd lgaaye wo to aap ahsaas hi bta de rhe ho.. jbki unn shabd k bina bhi dil se ahsaas ho rha hai wo bhi aese jese aansu aane h wale h
Lion_Hearted
Samajh gaya. Aapka matlab hai ki jo apne likha, usmein kuch zyada hi jazbaat ya shabd add ho gaye hain, jo us pal ko pehchaan se zyada express kar rahe hain. Aap chaahte hain ki wo ahsaas be-awaaz ho, jaise dil ke andar hi sab kuch ho raha ho, bina kisi extra lafz ke. Main is baat ko samajhkar apne likhe hue ko thoda aur subtle aur naturally emotional bana sakta hoon.
Agar aap chahen toh main usko thoda aur refined karke likh sakta hoon.
Agar aap chahen toh main usko thoda aur refined karke likh sakta hoon.
Lion_Hearted
Yeh rishta aise hi hai, jahan sab kuch apne aap samajh aata hai. Har baat, har ahsaas, bina shabdon ke bhi dil tak pahuchta hai. Kabhi kabhi aise lamhe aate hain, jahan aansu bas apne aap aansu ban jaate hain, bina kisi shabdon ke. Ye rishta, jo dil se rishta hai, uske beech zyada lafzon ki zarurat nahi hoti.
criss cross
Happy Birthday, Mom
To the one who loves with all her heart,
Who’s been our guide right from the start.
Today’s your day, so shine and glow,
For all the love you always show.
May joy and peace fill all you do,
Happy birthday, Mom, we love you!
To the one who loves with all her heart,
Who’s been our guide right from the start.
Today’s your day, so shine and glow,
For all the love you always show.
May joy and peace fill all you do,
Happy birthday, Mom, we love you!
Anchal23
Thank you ji...!!!!