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Lion_Hearted

Yeh kavita apni masoomiyat aur jazbaat ke gehre samundar mein le jaane wali hai. Aapne jis tarah se apne shabdon ko rang diya hai, wo mohabbat, aastha, aur apnepan ka ek adbhut sangam hai. Chaliye, iski gehraai aur maano par roshni daaltein hain:

1. "Hoon Boond ya Badali ya chahe Patang, Aasman tum Bano"
Aapki yeh pankti ek vyakti ke zindagi ke har roop mein apne saathi ki zarurat aur ahmiyat ko darshati hai. Chahe chhoti boond ho ya patang ki udaan, aasman ke bina sab adhura hai.@Anchal23

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2. "Hoon Ghazal ya Kavita ya koi Chhnd, Alfaaz tum Bano"
Alfaaz ka sandarbh yahaan us insaan ki ruhani ahmiyat se hai, jo har shabda ko zindagi deta hai. Ghazal aur kavita tabhi apni poori roop me aa sakte hain jab alfaaz ka sahara ho.

3. "Hoon Subah ya Saanjh ya Raat ki Pehar, Tum har waqt saath raho"
Yeh pankti apni mohabbat ke prati ek gehra lagav dikhati hai. Subah ki nayi shuruaat ho ya raat ka sannata, apne saathi ka saath har pal zaroori hai.@Anchal23

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4. "Hoon Dhoondh ya Kuhra ya oas subah ki, Aaftaab tum Bano"
Dhoondh aur kuhra zindagi ke mushkil mod hain, aur aaftaab us mushkil ko door karne wali roshni. Yeh pankti ummeed aur sahare ka pratik hai.

5. "Hoon Dhara ya Nadi ya koi Lehar, Kinaara tum Bano"
Ek safar ki tarah, har dhara aur nadi apne kinaare ke bina adhoori hai. Yeh pankti mohabbat ke rishte ki adharshila hai – ek doosre ke liye asraya banna.@Anchal23

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6. "Hoon Dard ya Aanshu ya koi bhi Gam, Sahara tum Bano"
Yeh pankti apne saathi ke prati ek vachan hai ki dukh aur dard ke har mod par ek doosre ka sahara bane rahenge.

7. "Hoon Possh ya Aashaddh ya koi bhi Rutt, Saavan tum Bano"
Rutt aur saavan ka sandarbh zindagi ke har mausam mein khushi aur mohabbat ke roop mein saathi ki maang hai.@Anchal23

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Aapki kavita ek aise rishte ki tasveer hai jisme ek-doosre ke liye bas dene ki tamanna hai. Har pankti mohabbat aur samarpan se bhari hui hai. Agar aap chahein to isme aur jazbaat jod kar isse ek lamhi ya yaad ka pratik bana sakti hain.

Kya yeh kavita kisi khaas yaad, insaan, ya jazbaat se prerit hai?@Anchal23

Anchal23

Aapki kavita ek aise rishte ki tasveer hai jisme ek-doosre ke liye bas dene ki tamanna hai. Har pankti mohabbat aur samarpan se bhari hui hai. Agar aap chahein to isme aur jazbaat jod kar isse ek lamhi ya yaad ka pratik bana sakti hain.

Kya yeh kavita kisi khaas yaad, insaan, ya jazbaat se prerit hai?@Anchal23

apke itne acche se vistaar mai smjhane ka parytan kabil-e-tarif hai... pr

Ye baat bas mai apne aap se keh rhi hoon.. mai ye baat mhsoos kr rhi hu
To isme ek-doosre wala jo apne likha h wo yha nhi shi beth'ta

ek- dusre wala to mrng m thread mai daala tha maine