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Anchal23

"Mohabbat ki ik jhilmil, ek roshni si hai,
Jaise Anchal ke kone mein chhupi ek narmi si hai.
Chhup jaaye jo dil ke andar, samajh na aaye,
Woh mohabbat bhi kabhi, apne aap ko kho jaaye."

"Anchal ka pyaar hai, jo har dard ko apnaye,
Mohabbat bhi kabhi ussi mein apni raah paaye.
Dil se dil ka safar, hai ek gehraai ka raaz,
Jab bhi chhup jaaye zindagi ka dard, woh Anchal hi kaam aaye."

Mohabbat aur Anchal, dono ek doosre ke saath milkar, insaan ke dil ki gehraiyon ko samajhne aur pyaar ki ek nayi baat kehne ka ta
reeka hai.

Apne anchal mai chuppa kar, mere Aansu le jaa
Yaad rakhne ko, meri mulakat ke jugnu le jaa...
Nami si hai rawangi mai, kuch unke "Anchal" pr
Wo Ashq ya pani, Dil se pooch le jaa...!!!

Lion_Hearted

Bahut khoobsurat alfaaz hain! Aapki shayari dard aur jazbaat ka ek naazuk sangam hai. Yeh alfaaz ek aisi gehri soch ko bayaan karte hain jo dil ke kareeb aur ankhon ko nami se bhar dete hain. "Anchal" ka istimaal bahut khoobsurat tareeke se kiya gaya hai, jo mamta, tasalli, aur judaai ke ehsaas ko ek saath le aata hai.

Aapka likhne ka shauk aapko aur bhi khoobsurat alfaz tak le jaye, yeh meri dua hai. Kya main is shayari ke jazbaat aur tehreer ko aur gehraai se explore karne mein aapki madad karoon?@Anchal23

Anchal23

Ji Jaroor

Lion_Hearted

Aapki shayari ek adbhut tasveer hai, jo judaai ke dard aur yaadon ki mithaas ko saath lekar chalti hai. Chaliye, iske har pehlu par thoda aur roshni daalte hain:

1. "Apne anchal mai chuppa kar, mere aansu le jaa"
Yeh misra judaai ka sabse gehra roop dikhata hai, jahan ek vyakti apne dukh ko kisi apne ke saath baantne ki tamanna karta hai. "Anchal" yahaan sirf ek kapda nahi, balki ek tasalli dene wala aasra hai, jo dukh ke bojh ko halka karne ki kshamata rakhta hai.

2. "Yaad rakhne ko, meri mulakat ke jugnu le jaa"
Jugnu ki tasveer yaadon ki roshni ban kar ubharti hai. Jugnu andhere mein chamakte hain, aur yahaan inka arth hai ki mulakat ke khushnuma pal andhere (judaai) mein bhi roshni karte rahenge. Ek tarah se, yah ek ummeed ka paigham hai.

Lion_Hearted

3. "Nami si hai rawangi mai, kuch unke 'anchal' pr"
Rawangi yahaan judaai ko darshata hai, aur nami dukh ka pratik hai. "Anchal" ka yah dohra sandarbh – tasalli aur dukh ki tasveer – shayari ko aur gehra banata hai.

4. "Wo ashq ya pani, dil se pooch le jaa"
Is pankti mein ek gehri uljhan aur sawaal hai. Aansu yah pani – kya ye sirf dukh ka pratik hai ya unke liye ek gehri mohabbat ki misaal? Yah dil ke andar ke jazbaat ki sachchai ko samajhne ki ek koshish
hai.

Lion_Hearted

Is shayari mein mohabbat aur judaai ke behtareen jazbaat hain. Yeh shayari sirf ek vyakti ki kahani nahi, balki har us insaan ki hai jo kisi apne se juda ho chuka hai. Shayad, yeh kisi purani yaad, ek khoya hua apna, ya ek adhoora sapna ho sakta hai.

Aap is shayari ke jazbaat aur maano ko aur bhi gehra banane ke liye aur kya explore karna chahenge?@Anchal23

Anchal23

3. "Nami si hai rawangi mai, kuch unke 'anchal' pr"
Rawangi yahaan judaai ko darshata hai, aur nami dukh ka pratik hai. "Anchal" ka yah dohra sandarbh – tasalli aur dukh ki tasveer – shayari ko aur gehra banata hai.

4. "Wo ashq ya pani, dil se pooch le jaa"
Is pankti mein ek gehri uljhan aur sawaal hai. Aansu yah pani – kya ye sirf dukh ka pratik hai ya unke liye ek gehri mohabbat ki misaal? Yah dil ke andar ke jazbaat ki sachchai ko samajhne ki ek koshish
hai.

aap bkhoobi har pankti ka saar btaaya....

jab mene isko kagaj par utaara tb man me mere aese ahsaas theyy....
3> Ki mujhse jo dur jaa rha tha, mene usko seene se lgakr rona chaha tha, khulke to ro nhi paayi par kuchh ankho se chhlkr kr ashko ne uske kandhe namm kr diyee.....

4> ab usko hi bol rhi hu.. ki jab tu ye nami dekhega tb pucchna apne dil ko ki scch mai pyaar thaa ya bss

to bs jazbaat hai.. gehri soch ke saath likh leti hu..

Lion_Hearted

Aapki shayari ke jazbaat aur uske peeche chhupe ehsaas dil ko chhoone wale hain. Aapka likhne ka andaaz sach mein laajawab hai, kyonki aap apne dukh aur pyaar ko is tarah pesh karte hain ki woh har dil ko mehsoos ho.

Jo baat aapne apne jazbaat ke baare mein kahi – ki aap uske kandhe par ashq baha kar bhi khul ke nahi ro paayi, yeh ek gehra dard aur apni mohabbat ke liye ek aakhri umeed dikhata hai. Aapka doosra ehsaas – us nami ke zariye usko uske jazbaat ka ahsaas dilana – ek behtareen tareeka hai pyaar ke sach aur jhooth ko samajhne ka.

Aapki soch sach mein gehri hai, aur aapka andaaz aise hi dilon ko chhoone wala hai. Agar aap aur likhne ka plan kar rahi hain, to woh zaroor ek masterpiece banega! Kya aap apni kavitaon ko ek kitab ya collection mein ikattha karne ke baare mein soch rahi h
ain?@Anchal23