Ye kuch kuch ki jhijhak kamaal kar gayi hmari mohhbat kisi or ke naam kar gayi..
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Somaiya Karn
Lion_Hearted
Bahut hi khoobsurat aur jazbaat se bhari hui kavita hai! Ishq ke ehsaas, shaq ke girah, aur unsaid jazbaton ki kahani ko aapne badi nazakat se likha hai.
Khaas kar woh panktiyan, jo hichkichaahat aur khauf ke jazbat ko bayan karti hain:
"Mohabbat karti hoon tumse, Nhi keh paayi mai Us'se
Hichak lgti thi kehne mai, Thaa Darr 'Naa' Sun'ne ka kuch-kuch"
Ye har us dil ki kahani hai jo kabhi apne jazbaat zubaan par laane ki himmat nahi kar pata.
Aapki kalam sach mein dil se likhti hai. Likhti rahiye, aapka shabdon ka safar aur bhi behtareen
banega!@Anchal23
Khaas kar woh panktiyan, jo hichkichaahat aur khauf ke jazbat ko bayan karti hain:
"Mohabbat karti hoon tumse, Nhi keh paayi mai Us'se
Hichak lgti thi kehne mai, Thaa Darr 'Naa' Sun'ne ka kuch-kuch"
Ye har us dil ki kahani hai jo kabhi apne jazbaat zubaan par laane ki himmat nahi kar pata.
Aapki kalam sach mein dil se likhti hai. Likhti rahiye, aapka shabdon ka safar aur bhi behtareen
banega!@Anchal23
Lion_Hearted
Wah! Kya baat hai! Aapke alfaaz jazbaton ko ek naya rang de dete hain.
"Ye kuch kuch ki jhijhak kamaal kar gayi,
Hamari mohabbat kisi aur ke naam kar gayi."
Is ek pankti mein mohabbat ke dard aur bekasi ka itna gehra ehsaas hai ki dil tak chhoo jata hai. Mohabbat ka yeh safar kabhi asaan nahi hota, aur aapne us dard ko shabdon mein utar kar zinda kar diya hai.
Likhte rahiye, aapki kalam se mohabbat ki ek alag hi kahani nikal kar aati hai!@Somaiya Karn
"Ye kuch kuch ki jhijhak kamaal kar gayi,
Hamari mohabbat kisi aur ke naam kar gayi."
Is ek pankti mein mohabbat ke dard aur bekasi ka itna gehra ehsaas hai ki dil tak chhoo jata hai. Mohabbat ka yeh safar kabhi asaan nahi hota, aur aapne us dard ko shabdon mein utar kar zinda kar diya hai.
Likhte rahiye, aapki kalam se mohabbat ki ek alag hi kahani nikal kar aati hai!@Somaiya Karn
Rockzz
Bahut khub...
Yun kuch kuch me baat simat na jati
Agr kah dete dil ki baatein aur sab kuch..
Yun kuch kuch me baat simat na jati
Agr kah dete dil ki baatein aur sab kuch..
Lion_Hearted
Bahut khoob kaha aapne...
Shabdon ke peechhe chhupi gehraiyon ko samajhna, aur dil ki baat poori tarah kahna, ek alag hi hunar hai. Shayad isi liye kuch unsuni baatein hamesha dil ke kareeb reh jaati hain.@Rockzz
Shabdon ke peechhe chhupi gehraiyon ko samajhna, aur dil ki baat poori tarah kahna, ek alag hi hunar hai. Shayad isi liye kuch unsuni baatein hamesha dil ke kareeb reh jaati hain.@Rockzz
Anchal23
@Rockzz @Lion_Hearted Dil ki baatein krna aur kehna itna hi aasan hota to.. ye kuch kuch shabd ke kuch maayne hi nhi reh jaate....
wo "Kuch" kehne se jo dil mai Kashak uth'ti hai.. uska ahsaas kbhi smjh nhi paate.... chahe wo kuch btana ho ya kuch chupana ya kuch naa khna hi ho... kuch to baaki rhna hi chaiye
wo "Kuch" kehne se jo dil mai Kashak uth'ti hai.. uska ahsaas kbhi smjh nhi paate.... chahe wo kuch btana ho ya kuch chupana ya kuch naa khna hi ho... kuch to baaki rhna hi chaiye
Rockzz
Hmne to Dil khol diya apna phir bhi tanha hain
Unhone kuch kaha nhi phir bhi kah diya...
"Tum nhi samjhoge"
Unhone kuch kaha nhi phir bhi kah diya...
"Tum nhi samjhoge"
Lion_Hearted
Bilkul, aapne bilkul sach kaha... "Kuch" wo hai jo shabdon ke beech chhup jaata hai, jo kehne ke baad bhi na samjha jaa sake. Dil ki baatein agar asaani se samajh aati, toh shayad unka asli rang hi khatam ho jaata.
"Jab hum kuch keh na paaye, dil ki gehraiyon mein chhup jaaye,
Tab wo 'kuch' hi hai, jo zindagi ki raah dikhaaye.
Jo na kah paaye, jo na samajh paaye,
Wohhi toh asli jazbaat hai, jo kabhi zubaan na aaye."
Chup rehna ya kuch na kehna bhi apne aap mein ek gehra artha rakhta hai. Kabhi kabhi, woh jo hum keh nahi paate, wahi sabse zyada samajh mein aata hai. Kuch baatein kehna zaroori nahi hoti, kuch to rah jaane dena bhi zaroori hota hai.@Anchal23
"Jab hum kuch keh na paaye, dil ki gehraiyon mein chhup jaaye,
Tab wo 'kuch' hi hai, jo zindagi ki raah dikhaaye.
Jo na kah paaye, jo na samajh paaye,
Wohhi toh asli jazbaat hai, jo kabhi zubaan na aaye."
Chup rehna ya kuch na kehna bhi apne aap mein ek gehra artha rakhta hai. Kabhi kabhi, woh jo hum keh nahi paate, wahi sabse zyada samajh mein aata hai. Kuch baatein kehna zaroori nahi hoti, kuch to rah jaane dena bhi zaroori hota hai.@Anchal23
Lion_Hearted
Wah, aapki baat mein ek gehra dard aur samajh ki kami dikh rahi hai. Jab dil khol ke sab kuch keh diya ho, phir bhi tanha rehna, woh apna ek alag hi jazbaat hai. Aur doosri taraf, jo kuch nahi keh kar bhi sab kuch keh jaate hain, unka apna ek rahasya hota hai.
"Dil khol diya apna, phir bhi tanha rehna,
Unhone kuch nahi kaha, phir bhi sab kuch kehna.
Unke kehne se zyada, jo na keh paaye,
Wahi toh asli baat thi, jo dil ke andar samajh aaye."
Yeh "Tum nahi samjhoge" ek baat hai, jo kabhi kisi ko pura samajh nahi aata, lekin wo bechaini, wo tanhaayi, ek aise jazbaat se judi hoti hai jo sirf dil hi samajh sakta hai.@Rockzz
"Dil khol diya apna, phir bhi tanha rehna,
Unhone kuch nahi kaha, phir bhi sab kuch kehna.
Unke kehne se zyada, jo na keh paaye,
Wahi toh asli baat thi, jo dil ke andar samajh aaye."
Yeh "Tum nahi samjhoge" ek baat hai, jo kabhi kisi ko pura samajh nahi aata, lekin wo bechaini, wo tanhaayi, ek aise jazbaat se judi hoti hai jo sirf dil hi samajh sakta hai.@Rockzz
Rockzz
Ye baatein wo samjhte hai jinhein samajh hai @Lion_Hearted
Lion_Hearted
Bilkul! "Ye baatein wo samajhte hain, jinhein samajh hai." Yeh baat ek gehraai mein chhupi hui hai. Kabhi kabhi humari baatein, humare jazbaat, sirf unhi logon tak pahuch paate hain jo unhe mehsoos karte hain, jo apne anubhav se unhe samajh paate hain.
"Jo apne dard ko apne dil mein rakhte hain,
Wahi un baaton ko samajh paate hain,
Jinhein sab kuch keh kar bhi sab kuch na kehna ho,
Wo hi samajhte hain, jo apne raaste mein bhi tanha ho."
Aapne jo kaha, usmein jo gehraai hai, wahi asli samajh hai, jo sirf unhi tak pahuchti hai jo dil se samajh rahe hote hain.@Rockzz
"Jo apne dard ko apne dil mein rakhte hain,
Wahi un baaton ko samajh paate hain,
Jinhein sab kuch keh kar bhi sab kuch na kehna ho,
Wo hi samajhte hain, jo apne raaste mein bhi tanha ho."
Aapne jo kaha, usmein jo gehraai hai, wahi asli samajh hai, jo sirf unhi tak pahuchti hai jo dil se samajh rahe hote hain.@Rockzz
Anchal23
Gar Badnaam krke mujhe, sukoon milta hai tujhe....
To aa, beshak mujhe Badnaam kar....
par sun deewane.... mujhe bdnaam krne ke baad..
Shehar mai khule aam Naam tera bhi hoga..!!!
@Rockzz ✨श्वेतराग✨ Aksar Tanhai ke jimmedaar bhi whi shaksh hote hai jo apna dil khol dete hai.... Kai baar Khuli kitaab se Rashsya behtar hote hai
Gar Badnaam krke mujhe, sukoon milta hai tujhe....
To aa, beshak mujhe Badnaam kar....
par sun deewane.... mujhe bdnaam krne ke baad..
Shehar mai khule aam Naam tera bhi hoga..!!!
Rockzz
Naam ki fikar itni bhi nhi ki tujhe badnam kru
Gar tera sath nhi to ye tanhai bhi qubool hai..
Gar tera sath nhi to ye tanhai bhi qubool hai..
Anchal23
Meri ikk tasveer palkon ke sirhaane rkh lena, tumhre kaam jrur aayegi..!!!
@Rockzz ✨श्वेतराग✨ - Tanhaai , Udaasi aur Khamooshi se bhri ak andheri raat jrur aayegi....
Meri ikk tasveer palkon ke sirhaane rkh lena, tumhre kaam jrur aayegi..!!!
Lion_Hearted
Aapki baaton mein jo dard aur tanhai ka izhaar hai, woh sach mein dil ko chhup jaata hai. Kabhi kabhi, zindagi ki andheri raatein humare dil ke andar ki khamoshi ko aur gehra bana deti hain. Lekin aapne jo tasveer ke zariye apna jazbaat bayan kiya, usmein ek aisi khoobsurati hai, jo har pal ko yaad karne ke liye kaafi hoti hai.
"Tanhaayi, udaasi, aur khamoshi se bhari andheri raat,
Agar tumhe zarurat ho, meri tasveer tumhare paas ho saath.
Har ek pal jo khoya, woh tasveer tumhe yaad dilaayegi,
Jab bhi andheron mein kho jaoge, mere jazbaat tumhare saath ho jayenge."
Aapki tasveer ek aise safar ka hissa hai, jo humare jazbaat ko har andheron se roshan kar sakti hai. Aapke likhe har lafz mein ek aisa safar hai jo humare dil ko samajhne ka ek naya tareeka deta hai.
"Tanhaayi, udaasi, aur khamoshi se bhari andheri raat,
Agar tumhe zarurat ho, meri tasveer tumhare paas ho saath.
Har ek pal jo khoya, woh tasveer tumhe yaad dilaayegi,
Jab bhi andheron mein kho jaoge, mere jazbaat tumhare saath ho jayenge."
Aapki tasveer ek aise safar ka hissa hai, jo humare jazbaat ko har andheron se roshan kar sakti hai. Aapke likhe har lafz mein ek aisa safar hai jo humare dil ko samajhne ka ek naya tareeka deta hai.
Rockzz
Tasvir uski to bin dekhe hi dil me bnai hai...
Sone ke liye tasvir nhi, uska ehsas se aankhein surmai hai..
Sone ke liye tasvir nhi, uska ehsas se aankhein surmai hai..
Lion_Hearted
Aapke shabdon mein ek aisi gehraai hai jo bas ek dil se doosre dil tak pahuchti hai. Jab tasveer bina dekhe bhi dil mein ban jaati hai, toh woh ehsaas hi asli tasveer ban jaata hai. Aapne jo kaha—"Sone ke liye tasveer nahi, uska ehsaas se aankhein surmai hai," yeh baat dil ko choo jaati hai. Kabhi kabhi, jo hum mehsoos karte hain, wahi humari aankhon mein sabse gehra rang bana leta hai, jo na kisi tasveer se aur na kisi lafz se bayan ho sakta.
"Tasveer jo dil mein bani, woh sabse khaas thi,
Jise dekha nahi, phir bhi woh tasveer aankhon mein raas thi.
Sone ke liye jo tasveer nahi, woh ehsaas thi,
Aankhon ka surma, uske haseen ehsaas ki ek kahani thi."
Yeh jo tasveer aapne apne dil mein banayi hai, wahi sabse khaas aur gehra hai, jo aapki aankhon mein zin
da hai.
"Tasveer jo dil mein bani, woh sabse khaas thi,
Jise dekha nahi, phir bhi woh tasveer aankhon mein raas thi.
Sone ke liye jo tasveer nahi, woh ehsaas thi,
Aankhon ka surma, uske haseen ehsaas ki ek kahani thi."
Yeh jo tasveer aapne apne dil mein banayi hai, wahi sabse khaas aur gehra hai, jo aapki aankhon mein zin
da hai.
Lion_Hearted
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@Anchal23
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